I hope Dawn sees Peter do something reprehensible so she stops thinking smoochies with him at all!! She's gotta know he's EWWWW!!! I can't wait to see how Dawn does on shooting!! Will Faith show up in person at some point or only be talked about? I'd love to see Faith meet up with Edward! lol
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm not really sure where you are going with this story other than you seem to want to get Peter and Dawn into bed with each other.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Stabbing - Cake" from VillageOrchid
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Peter seems dangerous and cruel. Only a killer like Edward would think it was just kids being kids. Dawn might need to kill Peter, he's that dangerous to her.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
At some point Glory will show up, presumably? Knights of B. ? This sounds like it's set before Glory shows up, and is a generic "get Dawn out of Sunnydale thing not a "specific people were after her" thing. I was kind of hoping Anita would discover Dawn had the necromantic ability.... she did kind of raise Joyce in that one ep.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Stabbing - Cake" from Faeri
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Ch.4 was awesome, I cant wait for the next parts to come out!
I hope you're able to update soon!
Review By [Faeri] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow Stabbing - Cake" from spacey
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Just want to pipe in that I friggin love this fic so far
Review of chapter "Shadow Stabbing - Cake" from AllenPitt
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Any chance Spike or Angel will show up to check on her? Outside of the hell mouth...do either of them have an 'animal to call'? Any other special abilities? Spike's young for a vamp, Angel is over 250 (+ centuries in a hell dimension, maybe). Illyria would be fun... Knights of B. showing up again, maybe?
Comments from author:
I keep having this horrible image of Spike standing amidst fiery rubble while Rabbits go on a rampage...Spike does Not get an animal to call, he'd cause too much chaos.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Stabbing - Cake" from Eureka
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LOL But I don't think he can do anything with her since his dad is her dad. Wouldn't that be incest? Loved Dawnie stealing Anita's vehicle!!
Comments from author:
Peter is NOT the son of Edward.
Edward is his stepfather, not genetic mixing. So they can in fact 'do something' together.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow Stabbing - Cake" from Xeelia
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Oh I soo love this! I love the mentions of winter and spring in the descriptions of Edward's and Dawn's eyes! I still think Dawn should break Peter's arm or something but eh whatever. hehe Will Dawn meet the St. Louis vampires? I love the twist with the nargle!! Great work all around!! More please!! *hands you cookies* :D
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patience, Shadow" from TrueRedRose
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More please!
Review By [TrueRedRose] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
I really liked this chapter but do wish we'd "seen" the fight. (HEHE) Will Riley's connection show up, like will Buffy send him to check on Dawn? If so it would be cool to see Edward and him have a past! I'd love to see Peter try to apologize only to get an ice princess/snarky/cutting response from Dawn and see them fight again!! hehe Gotta love the blood shed! Great work!! Thanks again!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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