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Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from starwolf
Review:
very well done. lets face it Amanda needs a spanking every once in a while, even if its verbal from mom. Rack needs to die, and soon.
thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you. Yes, Amanda is a bit of a naughty girl, isn't she? Rebecca will be around to make sure she toes the line, at least some of the time. Rack is a very nasty piece of work. I'm quite proud of how I'm using him. ;-)


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Review By [starwolf] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from Arekanderu
Review:
Dear god this was truly amazing. You have weaved these characters together so perfectly it takes my breath away. You are truly a master writer and I can't wait for the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you. I admit it takes some planning to get it all right and two dedicated betas and a lot of notes. ;-)

Many thanks for the compliments. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from SpacedCadet
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“It’s strangely balanced and rather too heavy for use,” Duncan supplied. “As if it was made for someone quite short but with prodigious strength"


Like a goblin blacksmith...or maybe a tall part-goblin blacksmith ?
Comments from author:
Nope, like a short, super strong girl...

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Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from Meneldur
Review:
Great chapter. I don't have much to say, simply because it was so good, but I loved the fight scenes, and that Darius and Nefertiri finally got together. Also, we see Hazel for the first time, and an interesting sword which might be what Buffy used?
It turns out Snape is more and more connected. And he knows the truth about his ancestor, and people who knew him. I can't wait to see how it'll all tie in, and the family's reaction when they all find out what's going on.
BTW, I've been wondering about the formal arrangement of the family - is there some kind of ranking or hierarchy, especially in the magical context? Are there separate positions and responsibilities for the Patriarch/Matriarch, their consort, Heir/ess, the Eldest member of the House, the most Powerful, and so forth? These things interest me.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad the fight scenes worked, I always feel they're stilted. I like Darius and Nefertiri, even though they never met and canon.

Yup, Snape is going to have more of an impact than he thought.

Yes, there are certain duties attached to the ranks and titles. I might even explore them in story, one day. Let me contemplate...

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Review By [Meneldur] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice weaving. Looking forward to more soon.

James.
Comments from author:
Thank you, it was fun to do.

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great, great chapter!

Good fight scenes, good handling of Rack.

Thanks for a great story!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm always uncertain about my fight scenes, I feel they are not my best talent to write.

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Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from Senko
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Hmmm missed chapter 3 which is a shame as it explains why Dawn's running around in Lonely Souls. So we have an ancient magical sword probably designed for a slayer, an ancient gemstone which may contain the soul of a wizard and a few new loose ends hmmmmm.
Comments from author:
Yes, I may have to reiterate that again. Quite a few loose endes, yes...

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Review By [Senko] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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What makes me think that Adam Cain Abel Addams is going by the name Adam Pierson these days?
Comments from author:
Because he has a tendency to rub people's noses into how clever he really is?

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Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from harcroft
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Hazel? I assume that is Willow's remaining triplet. Does this mean there is a chance of the triplets once more all having bodies? (even if Rowan stays in a robot body forever, though I kind of hope she gets an actual body at some point.)

overall, a very good chapter, from an excellent author. Though if Snape is still using Dark magic, i wonder how bad a Cleansing Ritual would have to be to remove the taint from his magic. If it would even work on a Focus User. ( and I assume at least one character in Lost Souls will become a True Wizard, I just wonder who)
Comments from author:
Yup, it is. The triplets are Willow Danielle, Rowan Davida and Hazel Dannah. Though their full names are given only once.

Thank you, some of your questions will be (partially) answered quite soon. Others not so soon...

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Review By [harcroft] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memento Mori" from AllenPitt
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And they found a sword apparently designed for the Slayer. Neat! Meanwhile I can't believe the bad luck poor Marigold is having. Surely things will take a turn for the better for them, soon? We're all rooting for them! Ok, maybe not.
Great story all around.
Comments from author:
Yup. Bad luck favours the ones who face the well-prepared. ;-) Uprooting, maybe...

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Methuselah's Children" from Zarbon
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You can Keep the town of Vannes. Near of this town, there are St Anne d'Auray with a great pilgrim for Sainte Anne. There are also a Abbey of Saint Anne de Kernogan at Plouharnel (Morbihan) near Carnac.
Comments from author:
Yes, but Amanda is from St. Anne in Normandy (non-existent or not) and Rebecca was an abbess there. So it is now Mortain, or should be, I've only changed it twice... though they might have made a mistake with making it Normandy, not Brittany. Anyway, Mortain now.

Thanks for the info and the review.
Review By [Zarbon] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Methuselah's Children" from Zarbon
Review:
Good story.

BUT Vannes is in Britanny, not in Normandy. (See a map in France). It's a town of Morbihan.
Comments from author:
I quite agree. I could not find an Abbey of St. Anne of any age in Normandy, though there some streets named after her. I pencilled in Vannes because I was reading a book about poverty in the Ancien Regime which mentioned the town just when I needed to fill in a place. The name of the place I finally chose was Mortain, and I forgot to change it. IT should be correct now, but I've noticed that TtH occasionally has problems dealing with edits.

Thanks for pointing this out, and thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [Zarbon] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Methuselah's Children" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Loving this story. Really like the by-play between the various parties.

One confusing thing. I did realize that Luther had left/escaped while Rebbeca and Nefertiti was talking. I kept expecting him to pop-off and say, "Enough chatter! Finish me off! PLEASE JUST KILL ME NOW!!!!". Or something like that.

James
Comments from author:
Nope, he was smart enough to run. A greate deal of Highlander was flashback and byplay. I tried to get that into the story.

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Methuselah's Children" from etienneofthewestwind
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I thought Shaggy Dog and Lonely Souls were concurrent. Does this take place during Dark Portrait?

The dance between Darius and Nefritiri was very entertaining. Rebecca was an immortal we never saw enough of. You´re saving her makes for some interesting possibilities. And her coming together with Darius, Tiri, Snspe and McLeod... the rest of the crystal caper promises to be something else.
Comments from author:
Most of Ora pro Nobis takes place before LS. This does indeed take place during Dark Portrait. (Highlander started a few years earlier after all.)

Rebecca, with her knowledge and abilities, makes an excellent addition to the world. The Crystal Caper may not be as much fun as you hope...

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Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Methuselah's Children" from shazamfan
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The fun at watching Darius fend off Nef's advances area riot. The flashbacks of times with Nef and Becky are fun as well. Really enjoying the drama unfolding here in this tale and looking forwards to Amanda and Nef ganging up on their two boys.

-J-
Comments from author:
Nefertiri is going to pounce if Darius does not act soon. Duncan and Amanda have a strange relationship at this time. But we shall see where it leads. (Bed, probably. Man-whore that Duncan is...;-) )
Rebecca is probably going to be inspired to drag John off, cave woman style, by her friends' examples too.

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Review By [shazamfan] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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