Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
SulienReview:
Oh, I want to see more of this one, please! And I seriously need to pick up "These Old Shades" and "Devil's Cub".
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Sulien] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
djhardimReview:
I didn't know what book you were using until I read one of the reviews.
Only reason I can see Xander familar with this book is that it was assigned in class.
You may want to add a disclaimer to keep the moderators happy.
Comments from author:
Done, and thanks. Also, this is actually a follow-up of 'Lady on the Hellmouth' where Willow turned into Leonie at Halloween, which I've added to the a/n.
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djhardim] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
kevinnReview:
Well this is original, a crossover with These Old Shades!! Nicely played. I'm not sure Leonie was ever that insecure tho...?
Comments from author:
Jealous more than insecure, perhaps. You see it in both These Old Shades and The Devil's Cub.
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kevinn] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]