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Review of chapter "New world, new rules and new family" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I wish you would continue this. very much. is there any chance of you coming back to this?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [31 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New world, new rules and new family" from deathgeonous
Review:
This is interesting and probably should be continued when you have the time and inspiration to do so. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New world, new rules and new family" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I am definitely enjoying this so far. It has so many possibilities that I hope you explore. Looking forward to more.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New world, new rules and new family" from spk
Review:
Excited to see more of this crossover. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New world, new rules and new family" from Malyce
Review:
Just a couple of comments about the use of Elvish which in the case of those in Middle Earth, the Sindarin Elvish was used and not the strange combination of words you are using:

Silvershine in Sindarin would probably be Celeb (Silver) plus the word for shine which is Cal or Calad. Both words are pronounced with the hard K sound and not the soft 'see' (c) sound. So Buffy's new name would be Celebcal or Celebcalad. Remember that Elrond's wife Celebrian, was given the name because of her long silver hair which was similar to her father's hair... His name was Celeborn which means Silver Tree.

The word for husband is: Herven

The word for wife is: Hervess

The word Bereth is usually used as a translation for Queen rather than spouse.

A term of endearment between husband and wife could be 'meleth nin.' meaning My Love if you need to use that at some stage.

And the Powers That Be in Middle Earth are known as the Valar, not the Varda. Varda Elentari is Lord Manwe's wife, however and a Vala in her own right, she is also known by the name of Elbereth or Starkindler.

There are fourteen of them:

Lords of the Valar

Manwë Súlimo (The Elder King and Lord of the Breath of Arda)
Ulmo (Lord of the Waters)
Aulë (The Smith)
Oromë (The Huntsman of the Valar)
Mandos (Námo) (The Doomsman of the Valar and the Keeper of the Dead in the Halls of Waiting, i.e. Mandos)
Lórien (Irmo) (Lord of Dreams)
Tulkas Astaldo (The Valiant, the greatest of all who bear arms in Arda)

Queens of the Valar (Valier)

Varda Elentári (The Queen of the Stars) and Manwe's wife
Yavanna Kementári (The Queen of the Earth, Giver of Fruits) and wife of Aule
Nienna (The Lady of Tears)
Estë the Gentle (Lady of Healing) and wife of Lorien.
Vairë the Weaver and wife of Namo
Vána the Ever-young and wife of Orome
Nessa, wife of Tulkas

There are any amount of sites out there in the internet that give you the correct information and the correct words for the Elvish you are likely to need to use in your story.

I hope this is helpful to you when writing your story.

Best wishes.
Comments from author:
The translations I used were from a website and from previous stories that I have read. I'm glad for the help and for pointing out the errors which I hope i have now fixed.

K
Review By [Malyce] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from spk
Review:
Definitely intrigued. Love the pairing. Cannot wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from Zing
Review:
very cool intro! I like the mix of story lines, and can't wait to see how LOtR is tied to Highlander. :)

Thanks for the original fic!
Review By [Zing] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from Blackett
Review:
Interesting. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I have a lot of work and real life is interefering but I hope to write more soon.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from Lotusja
Review:
Okay, this is a little so ended. It had some promise to be a long story.
Comments from author:
Yeah, i'm getting that vibe, I am strapped for time but I will write more.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from kiwi
Review:
well, that was interesting... throwing them into LOTR. :D
Comments from author:
Yeah it doesn't feel done. I'll write more with time.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from bradsan
Review:
Well I'm interested. So I won't mind a series because hanging like this is very uncomfortable. So don't be shy.
Comments from author:
Okay then, i'll write more.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Reunions" from hamrensel
Review:
I have to say that I'm a big fan of Buffy/Methos pairing and I loved this story till the very end. The whole thing with LotR didn't make since to me.
Comments from author:
This is a first story in what may come a series if there was interest. It has been edited to make more sense.
Review By [hamrensel] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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