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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from addictedtwotext
Review:
I have to chime in here and say that you have ABSOLUTELY captured the voice and tone of Burn Notice! I eagerly look forward to seeing anything else you write in that universe!
Comments from author:
Awwwww, thank you so much! I'm not sure if there'll be any more, but I'm going to be poking at it! If any more comes, it'll be posted up here. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
Review By [addictedtwotext] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
Interesting cross. The first story was hilarious. This was an interesting yet far more serious follow up. Still enjoyable though.
Comments from author:
Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the comment!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Makes sense that Michael would've encountered some of the Initiative's dirty laundry at some point in his career. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from missinglink
Review:
Bravo!!! Note perfect for tone, character portrayal and layout of the scene. The use of the voice over was spot on as well. Love what you have here and glad to see that you are developing it further than the one of previously.

Quick thought. For another part to this you should have Xander and Fiona hitting it off at a bar, comparing past exploits with explosives and preferred methods of making things go boom while Michael looks on worriedly and Sam by his side digging in at how cozy the two are getting. Would be great and work well depending on where in continuity this takes place. Xander definately shares some traits with Michael that Fiona appreciates and might find alluring in him as well. Filler and fun could be Xander referring to African exploits. It could also be a way they new each other before by meeting there before Fiona had headed to Miami to help Michael.

The last angle that seems like fun/interesting would be either Maddy (Mama Westen), Barry, or Nate (Bro Westen) be either the reason or somehow involved in the reason for Buffy and Xander being in Miami and Michael trying to not only help resolve and by this help out the one in the middle, but also keep it all concealed from Sam and Fiona at the same time. Michael jumping thru verbal hoops and trying to get by with the "trust me" toothy smile would be a hoot as would their calling him on it.

Again great job and thanks for the fun read. Can't wait for more! Later.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ^^ Thank you for the suggestion, it sounds like you've got a pretty detailed story in mind. I appreciate it, although I'm not sure how good I would be at following it. I'd love to see it if you wanted to give it a try yourself, though!! Please feel free to, it sounds awesome!
Review By [missinglink] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Musicalife
Review:
She and her little friend Xander Harries (Is this a typo or did you intentionally spell his last name wrong?)
Comments from author:
Nope, typo. Thanks for catching it for me!
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Perfectly in character for Mike and Sam, and I'd love to see more of this 'verse show up. ;-)
Comments from author:
Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm going to try poking at it to see if I can get anymore, just not sure yet. Thank you for commenting!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and very much in-character scene.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ghostrider
Review:
Glad to see more of this wonderful little universe you're creating. So, Mike knows about the kind of things that happen in the shadows' shadows, hm? Sounds like a fun time (not really) to be had in Miami with The Slayer hanging around there. Hopefully, you'll write more? Please?
Comments from author:
Hee, I'm glad you're liking it! I'm not sure if there'll be more, but I might poke at it and see. Thanks for the comment!
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on this fic, any chance of a sequel?
Comments from author:
Aww, thank you. ^^ I'm not sure, I might poke at it a bit.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
awsome awesome awsome

thanks for expanding
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it! ^^ Thanks for the comment!
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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