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Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from Loatroll
Review:
Interesting stuff. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Not bad. Little skimpy on details, but still very readable.

Looking forward to more.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
I'm not even sure where to begin with this mauling of the English language. Just... wow. In the last eight years, I have seen a lot on this site and just... God almighty. Are you even in high school yet? If you've passed freshman year, whoever taught you English should have their teaching degree revoked.
Comments from author:
That's what happens when you do a rush job. I didn't have time to polish this like I wanted to. There are a few glaring errors that I would normally have caught. I'll go over this and re-post Chapter1 since from this review I understand is the only chapter in question?
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* I can just hear it now "Damn Ferengi!" *snicker* at least Buffy's personality wasn't subsumed by 7's or by the Borg programming. Of course she's likely exhausted and that's why as much of the programming and especially the assimilation protocols likely asserted themselves so quickly & aggressively. More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Given that Borgdrones are designed to sychronise with other Borg, would Annika's echoes still be in Buffy?
Comments from author:
not yet.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from Gideon
Review:
Good to see Buffy has her eye on using some of the knowledge she now has. I don't know how far she will get with current technology levels but I'm sure she will give it a good shot!
At least she still seems to care for her friends and has not assimilated them. Her emotional involvement with Willow does seem to have decreased though. I hope Willow doesn't get lonely :(
And does Xander have to call Giles G-Man every single time? It might make sense to use his actual name sometimes.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patrols and alcoves" from Gideon
Review:
Buffy still knows French? How did that happen?
Looks like the nanos finished their work after she went on patrol. Disappointing that she now seems as emotionless and as keen on assimilating as Seven at her worst. I had hoped more of Buffy would remain. Will she assimilate her friends or just all other humans on the planet?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Nice and quick dealing with the bits everyone knows I see. Of course it may have gone a bit differently without Buffy there.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I'm hoping you'll post more of this story soon.

-I like the mention you put in about Snyder being compared to a Ferangi.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting, keep up the good work. I have a few more updates to read, but I think I'll call it a night since I have to work early tomorrow.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from jormunguard
Review:
Interesting start to a story, it seems to have some pretty good potential. I like that you are concentrating more on what happened after halloween rather than just the night itself like so many other stories do. However , you do seem to have a lot of problems with the character of 7of9 and some smaller problems with the Halloween episode itself. I would suggest going back and rewatching the Halloween episode from Buffy and a bunch of the episodes from Voyager that deals with Seven, before continuing the story.
Comments from author:
I'll consider it,thank you!
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alcoves andNew Beginnings" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oh... kay. I guess you've got horror and comedy mixed in this story. I shouldn't take it quite as seriously as I was.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Patrols and alcoves" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story a lot more than I had expected to. One reason I am enjoying it is the way you're not playing it for laughs, but have some natural humor thrown in. I also like the very serious Borg-Buffy with a bling fetish. I look forward to more assimilation of Borg-slayer goodness. I am wondering if Borg-Buffy will try to assimilate Angel. Lol! But won't Joyce pick up on Buffy's changes pretty quickly? And won't the other girls in the gym shower notice Buffy's 'modifications'? Lol!
Comments from author:
Remember, we haven't hit Monday yet, so gym class hasn't happened. I'm also thinking about Joyce's reactions at this point and making decisions about things that may or may not impact the story later on.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Patrols and alcoves" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
The second chapter sold me on this story. A Borg drone with Buffy's clothing and bling obsession is very funny. I look forward to reading more about the assimilation of Sunnydale.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patrols and alcoves" from greendragonmaster
Review:
like the direction your taking this in. its looking good so far I wonder who or what will be assimilated first
Review By [greendragonmaster] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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