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Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from ShyBob
Review:
Stunning Social Worker Gets Last Laugh With Gag Gift! Joker Cries Fowl!
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Joker's just lucky that Dawn's SISTER didn't come in on the rescue, or he'd be demon chow by now. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I love this series to pieces and am very happy to see an update! Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more whenever you're inclined.

Also, though I know this story is about Dawn and not Buffy, I would love to see a snippet eventually in which Buffy saves the day in some manner or other and surprises the daylights out of the Bat crew and enemies.

ETA: Oh, definitely don't want Buffy stepping on the Bat's toes and poking her nose into anything in his purview; I was thinking something more along the lines of demons or other such in hers that just happens to occur in the Bat's territory.

ETA the Second: Er...as you said. Yeah, the pain meds have kicked in! Never mind me...
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoy it and I'm possibly contemplating Buffy showing up at some point, maybe stalking a demon cult or some such. Not sure I want her 'saving the day' as it were since it is Gotham and therefor the Bat's territory and it seems kind of rude, but certainly something.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from Kirallie
Review:
Go Dawn!!!! Please say there'll be more to the series?
Comments from author:
Possibly. Can't say yes for sure, but possibly.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from Greywizard
Review:
Very much of the fun. Especially with Dawn breaking the Joker's nose with his own rubber chicken. ;-)
Comments from author:
He totally deserved it.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from VillageOrchid
Review:
... and now a trip to a good plastic surgeon in in order, too.

Good prose, and story telling over all.

The constructive thought here is that when the chapter started it didn't seem like she'd remembered anything from when she was taken, the Joker talks about having his minions work her over (it seems before she woke up), and then you review her memories of being worked over by the Joker. Granted it is possible that she was further worked over by the minions while she was unconscious, but I had a few problems with the time line.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! When the chapter started she didn't quite remember, but by the end of the first paragraph it came back. Also Joker mentioned she should be glad that he hadn't let his minions work her over. Thanks for the constructive criticism, it made me double check.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Abusive Rubber Chickens" from Bouquet
Review:
YAAAAAAYYYY XDDDDDDDDDDD

So glad you continue writing about Dawn and Dick- one of the best xover pairings in my opinion ;)

I really enjoyed the way you made Dawn reflect about her kindnapping situation like the part where she has to find a middle ground between appearing afraid or cocky.

Especially I like, that she broke Joker's nose with his rubber chicken; it seemed like something Dawn would definitly do :)
Comments from author:
I thought having Dawn use his own weapon against him was somehow fitting and I'm glad that you agree.
Review By [Bouquet] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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