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Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from SilentAddiction
Review:
So awesome! I loved the interactions and flirting, and the way Xander can throw both Jack and John off their games a bit and intrigue them! There has to be more right? Please let there be more? Pretty pleases?
Comments from author:
Sorry to say this fic is pretty much a dead one. I'm pretty unhappy with the direction of Torchwood went in the later half of season two and the miniseries that have followed. I enjoy Doctor Who but I don't watch the show religiously so there's a lot I don't know about the DW-universe to do this story justice. I'm just not comfortable writing more without knowing more about Doctor Who and rewatching Torchwood.
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting so far. Hope you continue this.
Comments from author:
I plan to but, I have to admit I've watched very little Doctor Who or Torchwood. So while I'm comfortable covering the episode kiss kiss bang bang, where I go from there has left me lost. I need to watch a serious amount of the shows before I'll feel confident enough to do this idea justice.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from calikocat
Review:
Hmm....nifty. Tracking now. XD
Comments from author:
Nifty, eh? Well thanks for the review and the tracking.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [20 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from bliss
Review:
For the love of all things holy, PLEASE finish this. I think you incorporated Xander in beautifully and I cannot wait to read more!! Not to mention excellent job on the characterizations. :) Brilliant story!
Comments from author:
thanks for the high praise review bliss. I do plan to continue writing this story and eventually finish it. It's just going to be a very slow process between RL being crazy and my need to be true to series canon. Not saying season two of torchwood will happen the same way but more i follow the rules of the universe.
Review By [bliss] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from silvergaurd
Review:
Loved it. Hope to see more.
Comments from author:
thank you. glad you liked it.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from SilentAddiction
Review:
Hell yeah, great chapter! I freaking love this story, please update soon! Thanks for posting!!
Comments from author:
lol, I'm trying, really I am. But the boys are just giving me hell. They'd rather sit around like 12 year old girls at a slumber party gossiping than do anything plot related. It's like herding cats. Thank you for the review and I will try not to take 5 months for the next update.
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting Love and Hate" from msdarque
Review:
Absolutely loved it!!
Especially John being all protective of Xander as "his eye candy". LOL
Eager to read what happens next.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Well, as I mentioned in this chapter I imagine John and Jack's partnership 'in every way' ended very badly. A sort of what each man wanted in a relationship was in serious conflict with the other. Jack called it off before John was ready to end things so he's doing a lot of sociopathic rebound from hurting Jack's friends to trying to kill Jack. Cause I seriously doubt he'd be that extreme over a daimond. At least, I like to think so.

Thank you for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from SilentAddiction
Review:
THIS IS AWESOME!!! You are coming back to work on it right? Right?! I'll even Beta for you if you want...pretty pleeeeeeeaaasssee? *Puppy-eyes initiated*
Comments from author:
lol, why thank very much for the positive review. I do plan to continue the story though I really should put an 'on hiatus' notice in the summary. Jack, John, and Xander are giving me problems. When I finally get the 3 written correctly I'll be sure to post. It's the main reason why I haven't updated already. There are other reasons of course but that's the biggie.
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from LLN
Review:
How? How did i almost miss this!!! I've been waiting for some one to write a story about John Hart and Xander since KKBB first aired!!! Please say your going to write more to this story? I wait on pins and needles!
(not really cause that would hurt.)

Ps it would be cool if john flirted a lot with Xander even if it's not the pairing.
Comments from author:
Yes, I plan to continue this story. Unfortunately, I'm having some trouble with Jack, John, and Xander being left in the bar alone. There's a serious problem between IC dialogue versus plot-movement. I could honestly write chapters on those three just sitting there chatting all night. So I'm sort of stuck at the moment. Once I finally tackle that scene the rest of the episode retake should be easy.

As for John and Xander being a pair... I was originally planning this along the lines of bromance but a lot of people seem in favor of the pairing. It'll probably end up John/Xander eventually... even if it takes visiting the Scooby gang to ensure it.
Review By [LLN] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from bex
Review:
Xander should mention spike looked younger!
Comments from author:
Huh, funny, I could of sworn I mentioned John looked older although not necessarily straight out. Well thank you for the review and tip regardless. I guess if you're reviewing you like the first chapter. No clue when i'll have the second finished. thanks of the review regardless.
Review By [bex] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from msdarque
Review:
Oooh, I love it! Absolutely love it! Cannot wait to read more. :D
I think Xander and Captain John Hart would make an interesting couple..... LOL
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the compliments. As for a Xander and John pairing, I'm not sure about that yet. I'm basically waiting to see where my muse leads the two.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from maryelizabeth
Review:
More please please please. This is such a brilliant start. *I send lots of cakes and happy thoughts to feed your muse* xxx
Comments from author:
lol, why thank you for your enthusiasm. I do have a pretty solid idea of how the episode KKBB plays out. After that I have a few ideas for events and hijinks but I'm not sure on the order. All I do know is that aside from one or two people the Buffy cast is not around until the end of Torchwood season 2.
Review By [maryelizabeth] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from MsSunshine
Review:
A very interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where you're headed. One question though, are you going with an American John? Hugz, Ms Sunshine
PS - Thanks ever so for pimping my story ;D
Comments from author:
lol, your story is totally worth pimping and I don't think we can classify John OR Jack as American. I mean they're probably from the same time era of the 51st century and not necessarily born and raised on Earth. I mean Jack gets away with being called American because he assumed the name of an American and has the accent. So, I dunno, labeling John American because of his accent seems so short-sighted. The comment from Xander about Spike being British was more of an acknowledgement of Spike's nationality and accent. So, to me John's more a 'I am the very model of a modern captain time agent' to me.

I'm starting to realize I'm a rare breed of reviewer that likes to talk. I mean compliments and encouragement are great but I liked being asked questions or asking them.
Review By [MsSunshine] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Loved this!
Comments from author:
Why thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope to post again soon-ish.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stay, Leave" from silvergaurd
Review:
hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I started on the next part of KKBB. It's starting to look like it'll take five 'chapters' or so to finish the episode. From there John and Xander will have many an adventure around the Whoverse with Buffyverse influences.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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