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Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from Drupadi
Review:
Very nice. It's well written and has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Review By [Drupadi] • Date [9 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from Netchka
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More please! Soon? Please? A very good start to the fic. Can't wait for more chapters to come.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from Piterio
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That was different not bad but different. I'd like to read more of it.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from musumenosuoh
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OMG IT'S FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from draconis
Review:
Getting good reviews. Like the story.

Abandoned?
Comments from author:
Not abandoned, just major writers block. Lol. I have been meaning to come back to add onto my fics, but I'm just not able to get motivated.
Review By [draconis] • Date [4 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from Genuka
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I just re-read this and I wish you'd update. Not that I have any right to complain what with my own lack of updating my own works... *sigh* I miss this story, it sooo wants to keep going.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from FemXanderForever
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You know it's been a while when the last time you got on was in July of last year.

Anyway, great story, and I really hope you continue on with it, since it seems like Dawn is turning into the real hard ass terror that Integra is in England.

Is Xander actually going to have the shapeshifting portion of the powers, or is that cancelled out because he is a 'childe' of Alucard?

Cheers,
FemXanderForever.
Comments from author:
Found myself with some spare time, so hopefully I can get out of this rut that writers block has pr ut me in and manage an update or two.
Review By [FemXanderForever] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from banner
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This is a very interesting idea - Xander-as-Alucard is one of my favorites, but Dawn-as-Integra is new and different.

I'll be watching for more of this.
Review By [banner] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from Dragonelf
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I am looking forward to see what you will get inspired to add to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Carrot Cheese Pie::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from mishaptaketwo
Review:
Great story and I can't wait to see where you are going to go with it. Please keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon.
Review By [mishaptaketwo] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I must admit, Xander being the No Life King in this would indicate the familiar form should be Hyena-shaped..
Comments from author:
Well I mean, most fanfiction I've read, the Hyena is still somewhat present in Xander's mind. Hyena!Xander is the best version I've seen so far, so I had to integrate.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from lillyb
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loved it. LOVED IT I SAY! no hiatus please come back(puppy dog eyes) seriously though fan fiction is a great way of improving writing skills. I know its hard having some hack pick your work apart but if you can survive the sticks and stones you will just get stronger. please don't give in.
Comments from author:
My hiatus actually doesnt have anything to do with that review, promise. I've got a bunch of homework and a reasearch paper due before I go to South Carolina for a week. Once I get all of my homework taken care of, I'll be back to writing my campy goodness. Promise! With provision that my professor doesnt bog me down with more homework. Thankyou so much for your support anyway, I appreciate all of you guys.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from CPTSkip
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I am enjoying your story a lot. While you could use a beta-reader, I am still having fun reading. For some perverted reason, I am really liking your 'mature' Dawn. I look forward to reading more of this story some time.
Comments from author:
Hey if you guys catch any grammatical errors, fee free to point 'em out. I appreciate it a lot!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from Eureka
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It MAY be campy, but some of us LIKE campy stories! Sometimes I would rather read a "campy" story than all this junk. Actually I read anything almost to see if I like it. IF I see grammatical errors I point it out in a private review, NOT out where everyone can see it. That is just rude guys. That is why you NEVER see a disparaging word from me in a review. Matter of fact, IF I DON'T LIKE IT I DON'T REVIEW IT! It is not my place to tell others who have not read something that it is no good cause that is MY OPINION!

Now on to my review...
LOVED IT! LMAO at the thought of Buffy not being able to stake Xan cause he is a real Nosferatu! So will Xan NOW get his revenge against Angel?
P.S. I happen to like knowing how upset a person is by the !! One ! is a lil pissed and more is a higher level of PO'd. In real life if a person could have a lil cloud showing !? and others I would know when NOT to get around a person!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the campy-ness, I'm going to have to look up to get the definition of that. Anyway, I appreciate your support even though after I answered back to that review I put it out of my mind completely. One bad review out of a hundred or so doesnt really catch my attention. I do appreciate you and the others support on my behalf though and I will definitely back to writing in the next week or so once I'm done with my paper.

As for your review,

I don't know what I'm going to do with the whole Angel/Xander conflict aside from having Xan intimidate him a whole lot.

P.S. I'm glad at least someone can undestand my use of exclamation. Thankyou so much for your review!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Finds Out" from cwolf
Review:
Joe is right, it is campy. On the other hand, most of the show was anyway. As for all the errors. Editing inside the individual chapters works wonders. I've used the option several times. It doesn't require replacing the chapter in its entirety either. I usually submit then reread, edit and save changes, reread, edit and save changes, etc until I think its ready. Then I still wind up with a few.

So, make note of what's messed up. Fix it. Then you won't get other future reviews pointing out the same things. As you said, constructive criticism is welcome.
Comments from author:
I gotta take a break from fic writing anyway, I've got a research paper due this week. But I really appreciate you being nice about pointing out my mistakes. As always I appreciate the constructive criticism and will do my best to fix everything.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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