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GideonReview:
Good for Giles! I can understand why he didn't believe Buffy was one of the most brilliant minds on Earth just from looking at her :) Maybe she will get a chance to show that side of her now.
Comments from author:
somewhat, but it is still going to go sort of like cannon. but with some minor changes that will not matter till after chosen.
Review By [
Gideon] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There is only one Chapter" from
DoodleReview:
Excellent chapter/fic. 1,000/100
Uhh, this sentence doesn't make complete sense to me, could you please expand upon/explain it?:
"Rupert Giles through his love for his charge allowed Good to be in the fight for realty."
Oh, and was there supposed to be an apostrophe after "charge" like: "charge, allowed".
Comments from author:
It is not supposed to make sence yet. As for commas, most are optional. A comma is pause, so if you read it that way sure.
I have Plans to expound on it later, so eventually it will make as much sence as doctor who stories do.
Review By [
Doodle] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There is only one Chapter" from
CrystalBlazeReview:
Was that last sentence "Rupert Giles, through his love for his charge, permitted Good to be in the fight for reality"?
Comments from author:
Thanks. I get that one wrong alot. It's fixed now.
Review By [
CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Not Rated
