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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JonnWolfe
Review:
Damn.... left on a cliffie. Shame on you.

This is a good mix, and I hope you come back to it.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from agnar
Review:
I like most of this fic, it's actually one of my favorites of yours. The only part I don't really care for is the Nathan drake parts, they seem t distract from the 'real' story.

I'm ok with the other crossovers, whether big or small, because they seem centered around the main plotline, Buffy/Xander and them helping Harry. That seems more than enough to me.

Bringing in this other plotline just seems distracting and detracting. You have lots of good ideas, but too often you seem to lose focus and try to stuff too many ideas, crossovers and plotlines into your fics.

Sticking to the main plotline and one side, which in this fic seems to be Buffy/Xander canon plotlines (defending the hellmouth) and using Xanders knowledge from DD to go help out Harry against voldemort. The other stuff could and should be saved for a new fic, or a sequel to this or something, if it actually does later reconnect to the buffy-verse.

It was great though to see Angel dusted, it happens far too rarely and I hate that guy, with or without a soul. The useless twat sat and moped for 100 years and only got off his ass to *really* repent when he was forced into it, and only tried to help out because it might get him into Buffy's pants.
Review By [agnar] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from ajw
Review:
Nice story I hope you two decide to continue it one day.

The sad part with the final chapter is I can so see Willow doing what she did. Thanks to her absentee parents she's someone who has to control everything around her just to make sure she's not abandoned by them just like her parents abandon her repeatedly. Couple that with her intelligence and belief that she's always right results in a bad combination. When you add her ability to use magic to the mix and you get an extremely bad combination as her arrogance makes Willow the wrong kind of person to have such an ability. As the last chapter showed so well. Especially how her arrogance, control freak ways and abuse of magic has now cost her everything as the Scoobies will never trust her again plus she will never use magic again.

I do hope you continue this as it will be interesting to see what Xander and co and do to help Harry. Xander having the magical powers and memories of Dumbledore - on top of any latent potential for wand magic he had himself as given Tony is a pure blood wizard he's likely to be one himself either a squib or just his power was supressed by the ambient energies of the Hellmouth - without Dumbledore's Willowesque need to control everything should be able to make a huge impact.
Review By [ajw] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, I do hope you are going to continue this someday!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Pointer
Review:
Just reread. Great as ever. Hope you get around to working on it some more. Lots of potential here.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from WillowSpeak
Review:
More, More, MORE! This is awesome and I love where it's going, so sad that Angel had to suffer for Willow's mistakes but it would be interesting to see if Spike comes into play now....
Review By [WillowSpeak] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from loretta
Review:
this is a great story, i hope you update it soon
Review By [loretta] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from dabraning
Review:
Any chance either of you two picking this back up?
Comments from author:
yepp, not abandoned...it is still on my to do list only real life doesn't gives me much time to write atm, but if you want to join up feel free to let me now :)
Review By [dabraning] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Cateagle
Review:
Okay, things are really getting interesting. I rather suspect that Willow is going to end up with her power bound just so the others will feel safe and I seriously doubt they'll ever trust her again. In the meantime, it rather looks like Fourth Year for Harry took a detour from canon and is getting far more interesting. 'Twill be most enlightening to see how the ensuing summer proceeds.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Cateagle
Review:
Okay, this is going to get rather interesting and I can see that Willow has truly "lost the plot". Doing it once was bad enough, ,doing it again, in hopes of a different result, was verging on abject stupidity.

I'm quite enjoying the comparisons between Sunnydale and Harry's situation and I suspect the mix of the two will lead to some fascinating occurrences.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Dragonelf
Review:
I think that you two have done a good job with this chapter and this story. :D

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I caught a couple minuscule mistakes which you might want to fix.

"he pulled his want and yelled"
I think you intended to write wand and not want, right?

You might want to fix the spelling of Ethan Rayne's surname in the first chapter and in a couple of locations in chapter two you might want to replace "quite" with "quiet".
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::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Comments from author:
tx that you like our work so far and also tx for those pointers. I think I caught and fixed those now.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Raider
Review:
outstanding work!
Review By [Raider] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
Review:
Well, the blade has been bound to Buffy. I wonder when she is going to put it to use? And the way that it was bound to her, reminds me of how Buffy got to bind the sword Vampire Slayer to herself in the Wandererverse. As for the news from Xander's father, now THAT is a shocker!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
Somethiung tells me that this blade is going to end up in Buffy's hands before long. I don't know why, but something tells me that it will.
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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