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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from daveykins
Review:
Hope your muse returns to this, as its a good story.
Review By [daveykins] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kdakmmt
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Love what you've done here but isn't a 28 month wait on a cliff hanger a bit of teasing??? :D
Review By [kdakmmt] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from twlight
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This is a wonderful wonderful story so far. I do have to wonder how Draco learned that spell so soon as it was a spell that Harry learned when he got Snape's old potions book. I am eagerly looking forward to more of this wonderful wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [24 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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Well, Angel is no more. And Willow, Red has had her powers taken from her. Now, its time to head for England and deal with Dumbledore and Voldemort.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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I smell a lot of troubles in the future for Angel, Buffy, Xander,Oz and Willow in the future. I see Angelus returning, with his obsession over Buffy. Xander is going to be caught up in Red's desire to have both Oz and Xander as her boyfriends. I suspect that its going to result in Willow getting her magic bound, because if it isn't, she could end up as dark and twisted as Voldemort or Dumbledore!
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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So, this blade that was forged, that Connor wanted, is intended for BUFFY?!? This explains a LOT! I think that Giles, Henry and Connor are going to be spending a lot of time teaching her how to use that sword.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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*Hums Indiana Jones theme song* We have VIP's in this chapter! VVIP! *Breaks into song: HERE WE ARE, BORN TO BE KINGS, WE'RE THE PRINCES OF THE UNIVERSE* Indiana Jones and Connor MaCleod of the clan MaCleod! I was surprised at Indy, but when I saw Russell Nash, I KNEW we were going to be seeing Highlanders! Stein, you were fortunate these people didn't come in with swords. Otherwise, it would have been a BLOODBATH!
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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Something tells me that we have NOT seen the last of Angel. This Vampire doesn't know the meaning of the word NO! I think he is going to end up being BURNED!
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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Xander did a very good job using magic on his first time out. But I think that Oz is going to be wanting to get some shots in at Xander for what he did to Willow. And I think that Jenny is going to be doing some research and assistance on her own.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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With Giles helping Xander should be of big help in patrols. But, how is this going to help with threats such as Angelus and Mayor Wilkins?
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JonnWolfe
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Damn.... left on a cliffie. Shame on you.

This is a good mix, and I hope you come back to it.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from agnar
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I like most of this fic, it's actually one of my favorites of yours. The only part I don't really care for is the Nathan drake parts, they seem t distract from the 'real' story.

I'm ok with the other crossovers, whether big or small, because they seem centered around the main plotline, Buffy/Xander and them helping Harry. That seems more than enough to me.

Bringing in this other plotline just seems distracting and detracting. You have lots of good ideas, but too often you seem to lose focus and try to stuff too many ideas, crossovers and plotlines into your fics.

Sticking to the main plotline and one side, which in this fic seems to be Buffy/Xander canon plotlines (defending the hellmouth) and using Xanders knowledge from DD to go help out Harry against voldemort. The other stuff could and should be saved for a new fic, or a sequel to this or something, if it actually does later reconnect to the buffy-verse.

It was great though to see Angel dusted, it happens far too rarely and I hate that guy, with or without a soul. The useless twat sat and moped for 100 years and only got off his ass to *really* repent when he was forced into it, and only tried to help out because it might get him into Buffy's pants.
Review By [agnar] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from ajw
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Nice story I hope you two decide to continue it one day.

The sad part with the final chapter is I can so see Willow doing what she did. Thanks to her absentee parents she's someone who has to control everything around her just to make sure she's not abandoned by them just like her parents abandon her repeatedly. Couple that with her intelligence and belief that she's always right results in a bad combination. When you add her ability to use magic to the mix and you get an extremely bad combination as her arrogance makes Willow the wrong kind of person to have such an ability. As the last chapter showed so well. Especially how her arrogance, control freak ways and abuse of magic has now cost her everything as the Scoobies will never trust her again plus she will never use magic again.

I do hope you continue this as it will be interesting to see what Xander and co and do to help Harry. Xander having the magical powers and memories of Dumbledore - on top of any latent potential for wand magic he had himself as given Tony is a pure blood wizard he's likely to be one himself either a squib or just his power was supressed by the ambient energies of the Hellmouth - without Dumbledore's Willowesque need to control everything should be able to make a huge impact.
Review By [ajw] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, I do hope you are going to continue this someday!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Pointer
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Just reread. Great as ever. Hope you get around to working on it some more. Lots of potential here.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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