Review of chapter "Chapter One" from moonlight
You should add more.
Review By [moonlight
] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Luna
Very short but a nice read. Buffy as a Kyoshi Warrior is an AWESOME idea and I really LOVE the idea of her being able to sew thanks to her Halloween memories!!
Review By [Luna
] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Please do go on with it.The Avatar and company should find a girl from California very interesting. :)
Review By [SamDragon
] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireDragon
It was very short but I would love to see what you have planned for the future with Buffy. How she got there doesn't really matter to me. Portal, Acathla, Key portal, the PTB just plopping her down there...did I leave any out? Ah, but where she goes from here, now that could be interesting. Does she join up with Aang when he comes to town? or stay with the others? Does Prince Zuco fall in love with her? because let's face it bad guys always fall for her and then turn from their evil ways. (he he he) or does she suddenly discover she also has some bending abilities? if so what ones? OOh another air bender? You could have a lot of fun with this one. If you are feeling up to it. : )
Review By [FireDragon
] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated