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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mwinter
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Chapter 4 please.
Review By [mwinter] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mwinter
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Interesting Story. i do hope that Forest gives harry the ring or what ever to stop Snape and Dumbledore snooping in his head. Also talking about where she's been and what she's seen to Harry so that he can trust her. Awaiting more.
Review By [mwinter] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from cloudleonsgurl
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Brillant as always. It is always such a pleasure to read what you two come up with, it's awesome and I love how you're pulling the story together. Always your avid reader, Cloud. :D
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from trongod
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Hermione is screwing up - but Ron is no surprise, nor Gin for that matter. The twins need to get off their butts and see what their brother really is - and start growing up themselves. They start puting things together and they will /not/ like the conclusions they come to, and with investigations, Ron's being a paid spy /will/ come out - Ron isn't smart enough to be able to hide what he's done from them.

If Ron is willing to betray someone supposedly his best friend for money, what makes anyone think he won't pull a Pettigrew for money and a ticket out of Great Britain ... Or a spot on Riddle's side?

Back to Hermione - the telephone situation /should/ make her think. Why didn't she call, when the phone system is safe from the Riddle faction? Why didn't she even use the royal mail system to send Harry letters, using Runes which she probably knew by then would keep the Dursleys from interfering with Harry receiving the letters? Questions like these /should/ be keeping the brilliant, once totally trusted friend awake all night thinking of what and why she did things that summer - and coming to some very uncomfortable conclusions as to who has betrayed her own trust, and caused her in turn to hurt her first true friend...
Review By [trongod] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Cateagle
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Interesting mix and crossover. 'Twill be fascinating to see where things go different from canon Fifth Year.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)jcon
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Good starting two chapters. Getting the characters established, lines drawn. On with the show!!! Looking forward to more of this tale.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Eureka
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ROFLMAO!! Ron is full of himself as usual, Ginny is a back-stabbing witch, but where is 'Moine?
Please don't take such a long time to update next time huh?

The Doctor is gonna have his hands full taking out the trash when she calls.
Comments from author:
Hermione isn't there yet...still on vacation with her parents, but she will be there soon (Hawklan)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from trongod
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I'm guessing Ronnikins hates harry even more than he hates his twin - another mole for Riddle, or one for the other Dark Lord, that's the question...

And where is Hermione, and where does she stand in all this?

Interesting to see The Doctor is reading the books; if he is out of the time stream he can read'em all, figure out where they diverge from his present Reality and swoop in to assist the potter heirs before Dumbles and his Fried Chicken - in SO many ways - Order can further screw things up for Normals, First Gens, and Halfbloods by maintaining the status quo.
Comments from author:
Hermione will come soon...still on vacation with her parents....after all its summer
Review By [trongod] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Raider
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very nicely done.
Review By [Raider] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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I absolutely love this, and can't wait for more. Boy when the Doctor meets Dumble will the shit hit the fan and will he go to them without being called once he reads the more darker HP books. Ginny Ginny Ginny, boy of boy do you think Forest will let you sink your claws into her brother in that manner, I Think Not! Again love this story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sabryna
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This is a really interesting first chapter. I'm quite curious to see how it goes next.
Review By [Sabryna] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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like this can't wait for more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cloudleonsgurl
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This is really, really good. I have to say it again, you two are brillant. the detail in the writing as well as showing how Forest and Harry's emotons were at being reunited. And Sirius knowing?! That was a twist, a very good twist. Great job and I will most defintely be making you a banner.

-Is there any thing you'd like me to include on the banner? Or just go with I imagine?
Comments from author:
hehe you were faster with the banner than we could answer...But awesome work again on it. Tx for it and the review. (Hawklan)

The banner you've already done is excellent and has already been added, thanks for doing it, it will do nicely (razial)
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
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oh this one I'll enjoy very much.
Review By [Raider] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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