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Review of chapter "Gallery" from purrfus
Review:
Read the first 2 chapters of the 4th story without grasping that it was a sequel. Hopefully it just means I'm more tired than I thought and not brain dead.

Cute.
Comments from author:
Hope you enjoyed them at any rate. Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [purrfus] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from serenityselena
Review:
an interesting meeting with surprising revelations ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you, and thanks for reviewing
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from missbucklebury
Review:
I, for one, would like to see more of this.
It's a very interesting premise, and I've yet to read a story from you that I didn't love :)

Edit: Well spotted! I'm definitely more hobbit than anything else :)
Comments from author:
Well, as you can see, the sequel is now up! And thanks for the compliment.

Thanks for reviewing. I presume btw, thast the alias refers to a certain Hobbit village?
Review By [missbucklebury] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from Gideon
Review:
I like it. The family connection is not with any of the main Buffy characters and is convoluted enough to seem realistic., and with a good reason for no prior contact. I also liked how Gorge was used for the initial contact, it is nice for it to be someone who is not Jack! The possibilities for changes to cannon in either series in a few years time is fantastic. I hope you add to this at some stage.
Comments from author:
I like George. He will play quite a big part in this fic.

And the changes will probably be significant, yes. The series will be updated, though probably not at the speed of Wiafs and strays, more like the Autumn leaves are turning...i.e. slowly.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gallery" from clei
Review:
>Review:
>Whoa... harsh. Totally believable, but harsh. Poor
>Janet. I don't know how she'd even handle finding
>out she's got an older sister who has no interest in
>the possibility of meeting her purely because of
>their parents' sins, though. That sucks.
>
>Human nature sucks.
>
>Well done.
>Comments from author:
>Well, Joyce has no reason to care, does she? her
>rotten father had a child, who might be equally
>rotten...How it will continue, or even if.. I dont
>know yet.
>
>And often it does. Thanks for reviewing.
>
>
Well, given Janet's love for sharp, pointy objects Joyce might have a point....
Comments from author:
Three older sisters, I should have mentioned. Janet likes sharp pointy objects in relation to Jack. ;-)
Review By [clei] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from Tanydwr
Review:
Until the end of the story I thought it was O'Neill, thought that may well have been the intention. Still, nice alternative connection for Stargate and Buffy, also explains why we never even hear a reference to Buffy's grandparents in the series.

Personally, I would love it to be continued, but all you work is great - I eagerly anticipate more!
Comments from author:
It was indeed the intention. I must admit I sometimes found the way I avoided using Hammond's name to be a tocuh artificial, but hey, 'tis only a short story.

Thank you for the compliments, I think I may have been inspired. Anything to dodge Forever is too long, apparently...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from PATM
Review:
when the officer says "oh dear" I did a spit take. The story of what is in that cabinet has got to go to Daniel right? Perhaps the life cycle of a Goa'uld....
Comments from author:
I think the contents of that cabinet might become a running gag if I make this a series...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [PATM] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from (Past Donor)oldshoe
Review:
Cute. Speaking of WMF, have you ever seen a Buffy - Flashman crossover?
Comments from author:
Thank you. Flashman...Hmm, can't say I have. I know the movie and the books, but I must admit I cannot see much overlap between them.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Past Donor)oldshoe] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nicely done. I didn't expect GEN George Hammond to be the visitor. In most stories it is usually Jack visiting Sunnydale. I would love to read more in this universe.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I have some ideas. I have too many ideas...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from dreameralways
Review:
At first I thought it was Jack. I hope that you continue this. It would be interesting to see how Buffy, possibly Dawn, and Cassie would get along.
Comments from author:
Heh, Misdirection and decption are our Primary weapons! Indeed it would, very interesting. So many ideas, so little time...
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from Cordyfan
Review:
Very nice story - I'd like to see more of this one. Obviously Janet and Joyce aren't about to bond immediately, but perhaps they might become friends in the long run. If their father was as unpleasant to Janet, as he was absent to Joyce (and Hammond certainly thinks he's unpleasant) that might be one point they can agree on.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I just threw it out, partly out of frustration. Bonding because Dad was unpleasant...maybe they can have Sam join too...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gallery" from (Current Donor)ayg
Review:
Interesting. Sounds like their father was a real piece of shit. Infidelity and divorce is one thing, abandoning your children and not sending support money is something else entirely. On the other hand, Hammond is right when he says it's not Janet's fault. On the third hand, since this is set in Sunnydale, Joyce has recently been betrayed and divorced, too, so the wound has been opened up again.

I actually got a bit confused at first, because I skipped the notes at the beginning. I'd been expecting (hoping for) a new story in your Waifs and Strays series. I didn't realize it wasn't until about halfway through. Well, that should teach me to actually read the author's notes first.
Comments from author:
Yes, that's Joyce and Janet's father well defined. Whether anything will come of it...

The next new story in Waifs and strays will be the sequel to Dark Portrait, I think. And I put those author's notes up there for a reason! I even try to keep them short and to the point...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)ayg] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Whoa... harsh. Totally believable, but harsh. Poor Janet. I don't know how she'd even handle finding out she's got an older sister who has no interest in the possibility of meeting her purely because of their parents' sins, though. That sucks.

Human nature sucks.

Well done.
Comments from author:
Well, Joyce has no reason to care, does she? her rotten father had a child, who might be equally rotten...How it will continue, or even if.. I don;t know yet.

And often it does. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from AtotheM
Review:
Pretty good. Fun to see Hammond out and about and I liked seeing Joyce at work. Interesting idea, her and Janet being sisters. They do both have a very strong no-nonsense aspect to them.
Comments from author:
I've always liked Hammond, a very good, decent man. And we get to see practically nothing of the Gallery, so I had fun thinking one up for Joyce. And indeed they do and it may help or hinder.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
Ok so I was expecting Jack not Hammond. Good story and now we know where the short genes came from for Buffy. More please ~GraysonPaladin
Comments from author:
Yes, I was hoping people would think it was Jack. Glad I fooled you. ;-) Don't call them short! Vertically challenged at the very most...


Thanks for reviewing
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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