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Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from Balder
Review:
I thought all of these were brilliant!
I really hope you are still planning a sequel to the Thor story. It was my favorite.
If you aren't planning one would you mind terribly if I took a crack at it? It wouldn't be as good but I think I could manage a passable version.
Review By [Balder] • Date [6 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from Meneldur
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Man, you're absolutely right, both about all the sex Cordelia gets and about the cheerleaders. I still want that sequel to Thor, though...

Anyway, this was great fun. I loved how it played between the cheer-leading, incest and superpowers part of this threesome. It was very original, and very enjoyable. And Willow's last line completed it perfectly.

EDIT: Well, in that case, more power to you. Frankly, the Jean Grey one is the one I'd most love a sequel for, because Jean!Cordelia and Emma!Willow is just so fantastic a concept... But I'm happy for most anything you write, as you know. Still, here's to hoping it happens soon. You know where I am if you want to bounce ideas.
Comments from author:
I'm pondering sequels to both Thor and Jean Grey, with the latter taking priority.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from feynstrom
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Apropos cheap costumes - Go as Bruce Banner after one of his episodes - just throw some random ill-fitting thrift shop clothes on.
Peter Parker (off the job) - T-shirt and jeans (and no camera).
Namor - Speedos and no shoes.
And of course, any superhero in disguise - just put on whatever clothes.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
This is great. Of course Xander, having little money, most likely is Simon Williams, Frank Castle, or Kon-El as they are literally the cheapest super hero costumes to pull off.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I've been repeatedly forced to pull a "Xander manages to sucker someone else into financing his dreams" plot twist to explain him being anything decent because... well, as much fun as it is to fap to the idea of Xander Stark or Xander-117 or whatever? He'd have to sell a kidney to afford something like that.
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from feynstrom
Review:
I like Cordelia and I like where you seem to be taking this story.

But with regard to another reviewer's comment concerning Pietro's (or any copy thereof) performance - even with shortened recovery, such a stutterfuck would be anything but pleasant for the woman involved. And as most males can give maybe two or three repeat performances at the best of time, and refuse to perform more than once or twice, their own lusts already sated.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was about to add that comment to it when you reviewed. Speaking as a guy, I know what my physical tolerances for repeat performance are... and how they differ from how long it can hold my interest in any one go.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from Chikageko
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rofl. I guess that means Willow still refused whatever either friend stuffed her into in favor of her sheet?

though hat begs the question, if xander managed to convince the cordettes to wear stuff from ethans, why in the world would he still go with the boring gun and army fatigues from surplus?
Comments from author:
Well, Gwen only points out that Xander ≠ Pietro that evening. For all we know, he went as Vision or Simon Williams (hoping to play up those characters' links to Wanda) or maybe he has a crush on Gwen and went as Alex?
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Sooo, what did Xander go as?
Comments from author:
The world may never know.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from CrystalBlaze
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Something most people miss is that 1) Pie's cool down time is just as sped up as the buildup.. meaning he'll last just fine, thank you. The other thing is that 2) his refractory time--the time to get it up again--probably needs a high speed camera to measure.
Comments from author:
1.) I'll leave it to you to decide if the repeated on/off rapid-fire thrusting would be your sort of thing.

2.) Even if he can keep getting it back up physically-speaking, after 2-3 times? He'd probably be mentally sated and ready to either roll over or wander off.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
hahahah wonderful, just wonderful!
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scarlet Witch" from Harry
Review:
Love it, Love it, LOVE IT! For once Cordy and the Cordettes come out on top! Wanda, Quicksilver and Polaris. YOWSAH, YOWSAH, YOWSAH! If Willow wasn't into girls yet, seeing these three WOULD tilt her that way!
Review By [Harry] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seven of Nine" from DarthTenebrus
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Good Goddess! That's just frightening. A Cordette Collective that just enslaved the Slayer! I suppose it would be a good thing that Borg implants wouldn't take in vampires as they are already dead, else the CordyBorgs would have a supernatural army! Look out, First...

Edit/Reply : ROFLMFAO. Any more Borg stories featuring the Scoobies? I always love a good solid dose of horror, and the Borg certainly fit the bill...
Comments from author:
Resistance is futile and unfashionable...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thor" from laoshi
Review:
If the last chapter has taught us anything it's to ask "Which hot chicks is Joe hooking up this week?" And the answer is all of them. Cordy as a rule 63 Thor is a a brilliant idea, Buffy as the blondest blonde who ever blonded is equally amusing. Was turning Harmony into Amora an homage to Dreamsmith's Supergoddess or did it just seem like an interesting fit? Wouldn't being a Norse Goddess mean Willow has quite a lot to do with Christmas via all of those Germanic Yule traditions imported into the holiday? I'd really forgotten just how fucked up Loki's sex life was: a stallion really? And his own brother while transformed into a woman? I thought that was just something Avengers fanfic authors did. Did you ever think about having this version of Cordy do the whole verily thy ass needeth swatting Buffy talk? Which chopstick is the fork is an awesome metaphor did you come up with it yourself or borrow it from somewhere? Great chapter very sad this one has come to an end.
Comments from author:
Harmony was totally an homage to DreamSmith's story; he got to read this before I posted it. And yes, Loki had sex with a stallion while transformed into a mare. That's where Odin's mount Sleipnir comes from in mythology. So yes, Odin rides around on his semi-grandson. As for Thor/Loki, that's something I carry over from Blue Belle... but in mythology, Loki and Sif hooked up. That's where some versions of the myth have the hair-cutting thing starting; basically, Loki doing the haircut post-sex.

The chopstick thing is an Ellen quote regarding questions she gets about her and Portia.

I might actually be doing costumes 11-15 in "Ten Costumes". I have a few other ideas, including one that has Cordelia accidentally getting possessed by a cosplayer to invert the clichéd "Xander throws together a bunch of pieces to represent his Level 50 Everything D&D persona and becomes l33t" stories. :)
Review By [laoshi] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shaak Ti" from laoshi
Review:
Lesbians are definitely more important than what your feelings towards Buffy are. Harmony passing off real aliens as photoshopped friends on deviant art is great idea and I loved the getting ahead pun. Also now I really want to go back and get caught up with Pyrrhic Victory.
Comments from author:
Lesbihonest... girl-on-girl beats Kate's bashing and mmooch's BINOs any day of the week.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thor" from Meneldur
Review:
Oh, I absolutely loved this one. You're right, it was a lot better to start this after some time had passed, because it offered much more. What I liked about this most of all was how the new characters fit with their original personalities, but we could see how they had merged, so that attributes of both the original and the new characters could be seen. Harmony as Amora was especially brilliant, as was Buffy as Sif. Meanwhile, Thor and Loki as Cordelia and Willow made a perfect backdrop for their rivalry while keeping some similarities with their original personalities, and enhancing them - so that Cordelia is more of a leader than ever, and Willow is much more a schemer and plotter. I'd love to see more of this one day, if the muse ever hit you and other projects were finished.
Comments from author:
I might actually be doing costumes 11-15 in "Ten Costumes". I have a few other ideas, including one that has Cordelia accidentally getting possessed by a cosplayer to invert the clichéd "Xander throws together a bunch of pieces to represent his Level 50 Everything D&D persona and becomes l33t" stories. :)
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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