Love the bit about Hammond KNOWING about the bald commanding officer "Captain Picard" jokes made in the mess, and deliberately playing it up with Walter. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Not Rated
I was about to say that Buffy needed the 3.1 ep "Anne" to realize she couldn't not be the slayer, before she could return to Sunnydale...but that's a separate issue from her relationship with her mom. Finding her for Joyce's sake, and letting them talk. That could work. I like the stories that have Dawn in them before S4, putting her in really changed Buffy's backstory quite a lot. No more an 'only child' who doesn't know how to share (as in S4, the college roommate). Only 3 days? Maybe her friends' won't be as harsh if she's back in a week or two instead of several months. Xander in particular was really angry with her, especially over 'the hell you put your mother through' (probably about "at least you've got a family that cares..." )---- Plus, any meeting of Giles / Daniel can be fun, if they realize their knowledge areas have big overlaps. * Yes, a fish tank would be over the top.
Comments from author:
I've got a habit of speeding up certain story lines and slowing others down. As of the Anne Steel angle, you'll have to wait I fear. I like writing young Dawn, it makes things fun.
Giles and Daniel will be fun.
A poo. I'll have him put a Collected works of Shakespeare on a stand then...
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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
it seems that the 2 half-sisters can get along quite well... they sure do share some similar opinion regarding their father... Hammond is such a great person ^_^
Comments from author:
Well, Janet is compassionate enough to offer to help. If they actually get along remains to be seen. I love Hammond.
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Review By [serenityselena] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Great sequel! It is more realistic that Janet and Joyce don't like each other on sight but can recognise some familyness after they have a reason to sympathise and help each other. I hope the people George sends after Buffy have a lot of sensitivity as she is feeling quite vulnerable at this time too. If some guys in uniform start chasing her she might not react well! Either she sill end up taking down an SG team or two, or Jack will find her in the diner and make friends by telling stupid jokes or maybe defending her honor from the customers at the diner. Or maybe both!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Janet and Joyce have enough going on that they need a shoulder to lean on. WHat are sisters for?
Jack and sensitivity? Oh dear...Well, we shall see, at any rate.
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Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very nice addition to your original story. You made me cackle out loud with "Walter eyed his superior with suspicion. *He can’t know about the Captain Picard jokes we make in the Cafeteria? Surely…*". In fact I am laughing again right now. I also liked Janet being upset with how much taller Joyce is. Having Dawn and Cassy be cousins gives me all sorts of amusing thoughts. After hearing more about the sisters' father I wonder if the sisters can raise the rat-bastard and kill him again? Just pondering.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I found it amusing myself. Janet always had a problem with her height. It will be something for her and Buffy to commisserate about.
I don´t think raising Dad is going to be top of their list. But interesting notion.
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Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated