Well written, and a great (if a bit creepy) story!
Only gave it a 9 because it's so OOC for Abby, although you do have her physical mannerisms and quirks down really well.
Comments from author:
I know what you mean; I tried to give her a good enough reason to go against her nature. One day I may write a sequel that expands Abby's guilt feelings. I did try to give a little hint at the end that those guilt feelings were already popping up, even as she cleaned up the blood.
She and Gibbs could have quite a conversation over this. Unfortunately, it's not really my kind of story, so I don't know if it will happen.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Works for me. I've seen the first 2 seasons of Dexter and I cheer him on. Forget Superman or Batman - my personal hero is the Punisher, so I like the way she thinks.