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Review of chapter "Not an update, but an apology" from mithrilandtj
Review:
WHAT?!?

But you have lots of finished stories!!!
Comments from author:
Yeah, sorry. Those stories were either collaborations with CorruptedSmile, one-shots or complete before I even started posting them. I am sorry.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not an update, but an apology" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
Hmm,

I just re-read this story from the beginning and while I liked how it started the last 2 or 3 chapters seem to have fizzled? I mean they lost some of the flow that was available from the start and the Remus/Xander scenes seem a little bit forced while you are also not catching most of Snape's acerbatic wit.

Could that be the cause of you losing interest?

I can't really throw stones as I have a story that I have not updated in a decade that is almost 70,000 words along that I am not sure if I can ever touch it again.

I like the plot, the character interaction and the new twists to some of the potential cliches but I don't think I could do it justice...

But if it really bites me I might give it a go.

Warm Regards,
~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from mithrilandtj
Review:
UPDATE PLEASE!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
i do so love this story
Comments from author:
Thank you. That's nice to hear
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [26 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from noirekitsune
Review:
YAY! i was so excited to see a new chapter for this!
i just love the fluffiness that is remus/xan, they're just so sweet together!
and i really like the way you write severus, his sarcastic ornery-ness is just too funny lol
the way he goes on about 'their disgusting cheerfulness' and 'unglue your eyes from each other' and then that comment last chapter about sacrificing a gryffindor first year to the patron saint of lost items was hilarious!
i hope there's more soon!

noirekitsune
noirekitsune@yahoo.com
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from Elleria
Review:
*falls out of chair in shock* An update! Yay! Love this story. And the next update better be before another year goes by or else.....
Comments from author:
It's shocking, I know :P I hope to update sooner this time. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [Elleria] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from silvergaurd
Review:
to bad about the missing smut. Glad to see you back. Hope to see more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad to be back too. And I'm glad the readers haven't left. I'll try to put the next chapter up sooner.
Thank you for reviewing
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from VillageOrchid
Review:
It was fun to see more of this story for a character moments, but there wasn't much happening in terms of plot.
You are of course forgiven for not showing the smut, it really is the intimacy that makes a relationship and you showed that.
Comments from author:
They thought of a solution. That's something :P But yes, it was mostly character work. I'm glad that the lack of smut didn't turn you off. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A wild solution appears" from ChaosLady
Review:
Not bad.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Under the clear night sky" from noirekitsune
Review:
i LOVE this!
i think its an awesome idea to have xander go back in time in the HP universe, i cant believe no one ever thought of it before ^^
and xan and remus are SO cute/hot together! lol
i think grown up xan is just such a good fit for remus, more than a younger xan would be i think, while the opposite is true for remus, a slightly less jaded remus is just right!:)
i hope you update soo i cant wait to read more!

noirekitsune
noirekitsune@yahoo.com
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. I was also surprised by the lack of this pairing, because it seems to normal to me. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [18 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Under the clear night sky" from twlight
Review:
wonderful. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Amazingly, I managed to get another chapter up. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Under the clear night sky" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Under the clear night sky" from (Current Donor)jcon
Review:
I just read the last 3 chapters. The April Fools chapter did garner a snicker or three from me, especially Sirius & Severus. Terrific crack fiction that one. Xander creating the Sunnyhell library out of the Room Of Requirement is typically Xander. Well done with that. His responses to Snape are entertaining. The last chapter was lovely. It was nice to read of a relaxed Xander, plus one where he is catered to rather than he being the one to make everyone comfortable. Enjoying this story & looking forward to reading further chapters. Thankyou.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the crack - I don't usually write it, so I don't have much experience. I couldn't imagine Xander reacting any other way - he's seen too much to be intimidated by Snape and he's too used to people underestimating him to be insulted easily. I thought Xander deserved some fluff in his life too. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Under the clear night sky" from souldriven
Review:
Awwww, the fluff, tis so cute. Also I like how Xander 'likes' Snape but, then he dated Cordelia and Anya. Would have liked to see the Snape snark but maybe another time? And Snape can marvel over the fact that *Lupin's boyfriend* is the one person in existence that not only puts up with his sour attitude but seems to be okay with it too. Snape and Xander friendship?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the fluff. I thought that if anyone, Xander wouldn't be put off by snark and a large vocabulary. He's well used to it. I have been considering making them friends, but I'll have to see where this goes. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [souldriven] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Under the clear night sky" from silvergaurd
Review:
great new chapter. Can;t wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to get the next chapter to you in two weeks.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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