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Review of chapter "Issue #1" from Markelo
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What about one of the Cuckoos
Review By [Markelo] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from MarcusSLazarus
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So... Adam's got the heroes and the Grandmaster gets the Scooby-villains?

DAMN, that's going to be complicated...

For a fourth member of Adam's team, I'm thinking Daredevil or the Human Torch; they're both close friends of Spidey and they've got some interesting tricks in their arsenals (Torch alone could be useful for long-range combat even without the issues of 'Contagion', assuming Willow can't use magic to negate the symbiote's weaknesses).

I might be ambiguous about the concept of turning heroes into villains- although your choice of Adam is still promsing-, but it's definitely going to be interesting to see how things go from here.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from Runewolf
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An interesting, fun start. I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes. I'm not really familiar with the Marvel stuff, but it seems internally consistent.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from Cdog
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It's nice to see you back. So far things are shaping up to be really interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing what the new "Frightful Four" will get up to.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from (Past Donor)betascud
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Ah, super-villain scoobies - exactly what I've been waiting for all this time, buahahaha...
Review By [(Past Donor)betascud] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from PhantomGuyver
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I've always liked your stories, and this one is no different, as for the fourth pawn, what about amy madison, or hell, warren mears.
Review By [PhantomGuyver] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from AndroidKing
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Very interesting tale, a like the super villain angle your going with. Different from the usual superpower story where they become heroes. I can't wait to see how your going to go with it.

As for the hero team why not Deadpool. He's the merc with a mouth and can throw quips with the best of them. Weapons expert and accelerated healing, and insane enough to be a hindrance as much as an asset on a team. The fact that he sees himself as a hero instead of an amoral assassin could play well with the character interaction. Deadpool is a pretty good choice for the hero lineup. But it's only a suggestion and this is your decision.
Review By [AndroidKing] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from Cyberwere
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Intriguing.

I don't think I've ever seen a "Contest of Champions" style fic before. Kudos to you!

I agree that Adam was vastly underused, given what he should have been capable of. Of course, so are most of the characters in Buffy. I also really like the way you've worked the origins of the power-ups into the actual canon story-line.

The only bit that's giving me a bit of trouble is Joyce as the daughter of Mephisto. It seems...odd, right now. But it's still early in the story, so I'm willing to see where you go with it.

All in all, a most promising start. I look forward to more.

Oh, and for the the fourth member of Adam's team, I say you use the one, the only......Squirrel Girl! :D
Review By [Cyberwere] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue #1" from mendal
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The only question I have is will xander improve kravens formula.
Review By [mendal] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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