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Review of chapter "Finding Family" from bradsan
Review:
euhm what do you mean "completed Yes" , the only I see is a unfinished good story. Will you please continue because this story is far from finished. Love it so far.

Try to make a real end.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your feedback. It's listed as complete because I'm not ready to add to it. I'm not even sure if I'm going to. If I do, I'll probably make it a longer story, but I'm not going to commit to anything.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Please don't end the story here! And I like Buffy teaming up with her cousin, Gwen!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome one shot, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani
Comments from author:
thank you very much!
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from DawnieWrites
Review:
I like it and hope there's more to come.
Review By [DawnieWrites] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from spacey
Review:
Uhm, no idea what i think. Feeling kinda stupified. Just letting you know i read...
Review By [spacey] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from dreameralways
Review:
Interesting concept but your writing is sort of stilted, not enough explanation or description. Is anyone going to say anything about them all possibly being related since Gwen is a Campbell which is the same as the Winchesters' maternal line and they're all aware of it now? I know that the show may have done things in a differently timed way, but you've exposed certain elements into it that would cause change. Again, it's an interesting concept, but take your time with it and flesh out what's actually happening in a scene. How do they feel? What's going on in their heads? Beyond a basic place, where are they?
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from clockworkorange
Review:
I liked Gwen quite a bit, so it's nice to see fic with her in it.

Is Eve the Mother of the Slayers as well? That could be interesting.
Comments from author:
That's where I was going with it, yeah. And with Slayers being a supernatural creature like vampires, they're going to be hunted by the Campbells as well.
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from nicjphill
Review:
I always liked Gwen and was sad when try killed her off. Like the connection of Bufyh and Gwen. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from justapiranha
Review:
I don't know if i like it or not. The whole story seemed rushed, like there was alot you wanted to do but had no idea how to pull it off. Each paragrah could have been expanded into a longer chapters if you had put in some details and love into it. Instead it seems like an unlikly choppy short story because it's not belivable. The potential for greatness is there if only you took the time to make it longer.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding Family" from Azure
Review:
I think it's good and I'd love to read more:) Especially things like Buffy being an Alpha, Dawn's access to the Key-ness, and of course the untied end of the fic makes one to want to know more.
Review By [Azure] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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