Very interesting idea. And yay for Callen, he now has a family, i wonder if Gibbs and Callen will find out about the supernatural. Can't wait for more.
Review By [brightnshiney] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Very interesting idea. And yay for Callen, he now has a family, i wonder if Gibbs and Callen will find out about the supernatural. Can't wait for more.
Review By [brightnshiney] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
First let me say that this story was the reason I started watching "NCIS: Los Angeles". I love it!
That said, are you planning to continue it? If so, will Dawn be included? And if Dawn's involved, is she going to be Hank and Joyce's daughter (ignoring that she was made from Buffy), or are you going to find a way of working in that she's genetically related to Gibbs and Shannon too? I'd love to see how the agents settle the vampire victim issue. Not to mention the twists and turns the 'new' family is going to have to go through while learning how to relate to one another.
Please update this soon! Thanks for sharing it!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
consider me confused what does Callen means "we’re not exactly twins. More like two of triplets". English is not my first language so care to explain this to me.
good chapter. still tracking this one.
edit: almost forgot, confusion is over after I read it the second time and paid more attenion to some details. It's good that I often read some stories more than once.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
I'm glad that this isn't a story where Dawn will show up. I still don't like the Scoobies very much after they took Buffy from her rest but I can cope with them.
It's a very good thing that Buffy don't love Hank as a father anymore so somebody can hit him. She won't care. Can't wait for the next update a read this story twice after my last review.
As angry as Gibbs is I hope that he realizes that he has no way of knowing for certain how Buffy feels about Hank and hurting him may just alienate her. Even if Buffy told him that she hated Hank, there is no way for Gibbs to know at this time that it isn't just anger over learning the truth talking. Also, Dawn is Buffy's sister and may (as far as Gibbs knows) be Hank's child in which case Gibbs may think that hurting Hank would make Dawn angry and in turn make Buffy angry. Other than that, lovely story. I was so happy to see an update. I love the concept and I love the story. I just ask that you don't make it move too fast. After everything that Buffy has been through I don't think that she would be quick to trust at all. I wouldn't be surprised if she never took to calling Gibbs "dad" since everyone that she's placed in that position has failed her. I think it would take a long time, but I bet she'd accept Callen first since he couldn't be faulted in any way and would just be a victim like her. Though wanting to protect him may actually hinder their bonding. Can't wait for more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Awesome story, can't wait for more...and I can't wait to see how the new family members discover and react to Buffy's profession, :) Hope for more soon.
Review By [SilverMidnight] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
I've only just come across the story after the new chapter and it's an interesting twist on the standard Buffy real family stories and I have to say I like it! Can't wait to see how NCIS/NCIS:LA teams handle the "nightlife". Please keep the updates coming!!!
Review By [PhoenixRising] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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