Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GideonReview:
An interesting look at what Buffy may or may not have been feeling at this time. And Willow completely unaware :(
I found it a little hard to tell where the author's note ended and the story began so you might want to put a separator in between. Something like *******************
Review By [
Gideon] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]