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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
There will be more.
Please tell me there will be another one or two.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but I want to focus on the two I have goin right now, before I try any more on this one.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
And the misunderstandings continue to escalate!
Comments from author:
I haven't finished fleshing out Buffy's response yet but they will pile up some more before it is straightened out.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
don't stop. love it
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from justapiranha
Review:
Didn't get what this story was about, so i went and read the first story, now i get it. please continue.
Comments from author:
Don't worry I will.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalbliss
Review:
Just found this series. Can't wait for the next story. Wonder how Buffy would react to all of it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to read them. I was working on Buffy's reaction first on waking their and meeting Teddy, but it felt wrong and very unreasonable so I decide to add his point of view first.
Review By [immortalbliss] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clockworkorange
Review:
I'm guessing that the little boy is Teddy Lupin?

Wow, he really stepped in it, didn't he? I don't see Buffy staying easily after that.
Comments from author:
Got it in one. Yea he did, but I think that he and Buffy are both one that are going to be owe the explanations. It could have been handled so much better with both Remus and Tonks in the and the previous story. But then again this story would not be here if they did. ;)
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Glendon
Review:
Well that explained nothing... Don't get me wrong. I like your writing style, but I'm having a hard time caring because I have no idea who anyone is. I could assume that it's Buffy and Draco, but I kept waiting for a name to come out at the end. Since it never came, as it sits, it doesn't make enough sense. Sorry. Small thing, but it's important or the reader doesn't know what's happening.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review. To be honest you would have to read the story before to understand anything at all. Its not Draco but Teddy Lupin.
Review By [(Past Donor)Glendon] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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