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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chikageko
Review:
In interesting fusion, I must say. Certianly not one of your better works, but not horrible either. I'm sure it'll get alot more interesting once, if, you get past the basic setup of the first few chapters. I'm curious though, will all your fusion alterations, who'll you be replacing robert williams with? D'hoffryn or Ahnyanka? And what will that mean for the wishes... also will you have Xander be more himself, or will you have him basically monkey the part Alladdin?

interesting.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Review:
She was bored and she hated been bored. - Being

...dangerous Grand Vizier to the Sultan Jafar, the man gave... - ...dangerous Grand Vizier to the Sultan, Jafar. The man gave... Otherwise it sounds like Jafar is the Sultan.

Otherwise, I like the start. Hope to see more.
Comments from author:
ahh tx for pointing those out. Fixed now. (Hawklan)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Wow I really like this. You integrated everyone so seamlessly and wow. The Master, Angel's not a vampire, (yet?). Willow, Buffy, Tara, Faith and Cordelia this is just brilliant. William's a vamp before Angel Does that mean Dru is to or did someone else sire Spike. Hmmm so many questions I love it. Can,t wait for more will be tracking this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MaxPayne
Review:
A ten for an superb idea for a fic..
Review By [MaxPayne] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TAO
Review:
Okay...this hit a 9.8 on my "WTF!" meter.

Awesome job so far.
Review By [TAO] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LetsRandom
Review:
Interesting setup of this alternate universe. I look forward to seeing what you end up doing with the story!
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
Review:
Very funny! Just had to say that you had me laughing and wondering if this is a dream perhaps..and if it is who's dream is it?
Comments from author:
It is not a dream Eureka, it is a au fic which combines both buffy and aladdin together in one universe. glad you enjoyed it and more to come soon (razial)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
You two always make my day! Brillant, I like how merged the Buf verse and the Alladin verse seamlessly! It's actually brillant and really good. I can't wait to see where you take this, and whenever you update, I'll be there to read. :D
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the first chapter, more to come soon but first I have to update Dark Secrets and one or two others but it will be done as your wonderful banner presented me a nice challenege on how to do this. I found it fun so thank you (razial)
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
I like Aladdin and I like the AU/not AU twist you've got on this story. Good going and good luck! Not a cross I've seen before.

(Just one small pet peeve--- you've joined the myriad --an extra large myriad at that-- of people who mix up definitely and defiantly. I can see why as they are both legitimate words and not misspellings and so immune to spell check, however they are definitely different words with defiantly different meanings.)

I don't take time to note when most other people do this, except for stories that deserve better than this small annoyance. So feel the love please and change this.

PS --- Any other writers reading this review -- please be careful of your definite and your defiant-- it messes up the minds of nitpickers such as myself, and my mind is messy enough already.
Comments from author:
Ok fixed to definitely. I hope you mind can rest now :) Tx for pointing that out. (Hawklan)
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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