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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gaulty
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [16 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
A well written scene setter with a tantalizing look at the Xeno's.
Comments from author:
thanks, i did it a little different in terms of how the xenos' act, but i figure since it's their homeworld they should be different.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
It's not quite to the point where Rule #17 comes into effect, but it's close. I highly recommend you find a beta before continuing, and have them proofread not only future chapters for you but fix this one as well.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Interesting. You have given a higher level of intelligence to the Aliens than is usually ascribed to them and I can see how traveling with the Predators would enable him to survive in such a place. I was wondering :) I feel bad for the Kryptonian that she sees her world like that, but it is better than a scattered pile of rubble! At least she should have no trouble with the Gouald on any system with a yellow sun, although the rumors of Hok'tar will ensure they remain interested in her :(
Comments from author:
thanks for the great review.
I hope you enjoy were things go.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
Is Hunter a known minor character from BtVS, or just some unnamed background character? Will Adria encounter the Orici Adria from Stargate?
Comments from author:
Hunter is supposed to be an unknown background character. I figure pick any face from the crowd in a random episode and you have hunter.
I didn't plan to have the Orici in this story, but you know maybe I will after all, it might be fun. this will probably end up being around the end of season 7 of Stargate to give a guideline, but I'm not planning on being two exact when it comes to continuity.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Not bad, not bad at all. So Krypton is alive but devastated and they have a Gate?. Interesting.
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
thanks. the next story will start by explaining what happened to Krypton.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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