good chapter, keep up the good work, byes

A well written scene setter with a tantalizing look at the Xeno's.

thanks, i did it a little different in terms of how the xenos' act, but i figure since it's their homeworld they should be different.

It's not quite to the point where Rule #17 comes into effect, but it's close. I highly recommend you find a beta before continuing, and have them proofread not only future chapters for you but fix this one as well.

Interesting. You have given a higher level of intelligence to the Aliens than is usually ascribed to them and I can see how traveling with the Predators would enable him to survive in such a place. I was wondering :) I feel bad for the Kryptonian that she sees her world like that, but it is better than a scattered pile of rubble! At least she should have no trouble with the Gouald on any system with a yellow sun, although the rumors of Hok'tar will ensure they remain interested in her :(

thanks for the great review.
I hope you enjoy were things go.

Is Hunter a known minor character from BtVS, or just some unnamed background character? Will Adria encounter the Orici Adria from Stargate?

Hunter is supposed to be an unknown background character. I figure pick any face from the crowd in a random episode and you have hunter.
I didn't plan to have the Orici in this story, but you know maybe I will after all, it might be fun. this will probably end up being around the end of season 7 of Stargate to give a guideline, but I'm not planning on being two exact when it comes to continuity.

Not bad, not bad at all. So Krypton is alive but devastated and they have a Gate?. Interesting.
See ya!!.

thanks. the next story will start by explaining what happened to Krypton.