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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fairywm
Review:
excellent... just waiting for the rest...
Review By [fairywm] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calikocat
Review:
*poke*

Just thought I'd drop a line to say this story is interesting and I hope you continue it.
Comments from author:
i'm glad you're enjoying it so far. i am planning on it, i've actually started writing on the next chapter some, hopefully i'll have it out soon. sorry for the delay.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from falsegod
Review:
update already
Comments from author:
ji'm glad you like it so far, unfortunately, i havne't got any more to update yet. haven't given up on it though promise :)
Review By [falsegod] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blend
Review:
I've always enjoyed the Xander-lands-in-AU stories, and your is definitely off to a great start. Thank you for sharing! :)
Review By [Blend] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from toowhiteprincess
Review:
I so love the Xander stories on this website. I wonder what you are going to do with him. hmmm...evil laugher...or, you could make him cute and sweet.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from noirekitsune
Review:
'a demon moth to the flames of hell' LOL
i thought that was hilarious!
im REALLY enjoying your story so and i hope you continue it soon!
especially the xander/spike part
i havent seen many anita crossovers with a xander/spike pairing and im really looking forward to reading it!
PLEASE update soon! ^^

noirekitsune@yahoo.com
Comments from author:
honestly, that's one of my favorite lines and i'm quite proud of ti lol it just kind of popped in my head one day and it's too fitting for xander i think. really glad you're enjoying the story :)
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [13 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
interesting more please
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
'Like demon moths to the flames of hell'. I loved that! Very clever! Very good descriptive phrase! So Xander's roomates are back huh? Good! As described in the scene where Xander had to defend himself against a bunch of homophobic would-be rapists, Xander needs evey edge he can get. Xander has been in AnitaVerse for six months and he hasn't changed, but obviously the Soldier and Hyena are back. Will the Hyena ping on the Missouri supernaturals' radars? If he feels like a were to them, how will they react to him? When and HOW will Spike be arriving? How would he find Xander anyhow? How will he react to the enhanced Xander? I like this story and I look forward to future updates.
Comments from author:
thanks, that line popped in my head and it was just too fitting. and i would answer all your questions, but then you wouldn't need to read ;) but xander will be more or less settled in by the time spike shows up
Review By [kayron] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SilentAddiction
Review:
I am so excited about this story! I love that Xander used Angel's name as a STRIPPER NAME!! He would totally murder him if he knew! XD I can't wait for the next chapter! Please please please update soon!
Comments from author:
thank you, i'm so glad you're enjoying it! and i know, it kinda plays into the plot for a minute later, but i could just see xander thinking about it and getting this totally evil grin on his face when he first decided to use it. i'm still writing the next chapter, but hopefully i'll have it out in the next week or so, i've got a ton of stories i'm working on (or should be working on)
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightslayer
Review:
great start to what could really be an intresting story. can't wait to see more
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Aw poor Xan denied dude.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msdarque
Review:
Poor Xander for being alone, but yay for some extras.
I kinda like that the soldier and hyena are back. :)
Interesting and quite exciting chapter!
Congrats!

PS Those attacking drunks were morons. Go Xander!
Comments from author:
i tend to like the solider!/hyena!xander fics, like seeing the different ways the two can influence his actions and sending him to the anita-verse gives him a good excuse to exploit both. and yeah, let's hear it for stupid drunks lol. glad you're liking it so far, thanks for reading :)
Review By [msdarque] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Are the tests only physical or meta as well? Of course out in the boonies they probably don't have all the latest and greatest, but once he gets closer to St. Louis...
Comments from author:
pretty much just physical, holy water and crosses and blood tests for lycanthropy. as you said, they're out in the boonies lol he gets a whole new set of probs when he gets to st. louis (cause i'm evil like that lol)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IrFane
Review:
So far, I'm thoroughly amused. Might want to skimp on the 'human' tests later though. Xander did have shark?-dna spliced in, though the amount that actually affected him varies by the story. :P
Comments from author:
i actually kinda forgot about that ep, tend to do that unless it's brought up in a fic and serves a purpose. but no, xander wont' be putting up with that kind of thing again, at least not to that extent. glad you're liking the story so far though, thanks for reading :)
Review By [IrFane] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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