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The Truth about Potentials

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
Interesting. Sad that it is complete.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Bad news for potentials generally :( I would certainly choose Slayerhood rather than an early death if offered the choice. I noticed Buffy was not trying to appear very intelligent to Hetti, I hope that does not lead to Buffy being dismissed as not useful by her. And what is it about Xander and Dawn that makes them special?
I noticed a few small mistakes in this chapter. The wrong word used, or mistakes in placing the speech marks. An extra check before you post might be helpful.
Comments from author:
Xander is the one who sees according to the first and Dawn is a mystical key whos body is made out of the slayer
As for mistakes yeah I know they might be there but as school is way more important I just don't have the time or ability to comb through it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xon
Review:
Hetty's last name is Lang.
Comments from author:
yes, and that means what?
Review By [xon] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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