Review of chapter "Pictures of 'the cast'..." from MarcusRowland
This is interesting - one thing I'd suggest adding is Earth years in the stories that involve contact with Earth (e.g. the beginning and end and epilogue of Return of the Key)
later - yes, that helps a lot!
Comments from author:
Oh - good thinking! a job for this evening I think.
Took a couple more days - but I think it works now.
Review By [MarcusRowland
] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated