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Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from AllenPitt
Review:
Things seem to be finally turning up for Sirius. It'd be great if Worm. does get caught & exposed. Nice to see Mrs. Norris improving (plus backstory on her). Dumbledore is going to have some soul searching to do --Sirius never got a trial or even a hearing.
Comments from author:
Wormtail had better start running. Hogwarts greatest mouser is back on her game and looking for a challenge...

Dumbledore wasn't the only one who dropped the ball there, but he will blame himself, yes.

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from musumenosuoh
Review:
awesomeness!!!! looking forward to more for all of them!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Some of these haven't been upodated in far too long. I need to work on that.

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Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from spikesplayfulpet
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Such a great chapter :) Its funny because I have been rereading the whole series again while awaiting an update on Lonley Souls and I just finished the end of this one and you updated :) The punishment for both Luna and Myrtle I think was justified at least in the sense that it will make them both think before they go off and do something so careless again, even though Luna did make Wolf's Balm in the end. It was nice to see that Mrs. Norris was being treated like the royalty that she is and that she is back to being a nice cat. The way that Remus found out that Peter is actually alive was a nice tie in with all the kids. The scenes with Remus and Sirus were funny and it was great to see them getting along. I can't wait to see if Peter gets what is coming to him. Keep up the great work and the great writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Well, that was timely. Then again, re-reading the whole series… That would take some time.

Luna and Myrtle could have gotten a much worse punishment, and this will make them think.

Mrs Norris is a Queen among cats. ;-) All must pay homage!

Remus and Sirius will have some problems to work through. Sirius and Severus… that will be the challenge.

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Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from starwolf
Review:
its great to see more of this. the Mrs. Norris bit was inspired. well done, thanks
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Mrs Norris was much maligned. Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [starwolf] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from Eureka
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Thanks for the shout out Vid.
Just so you know, I only req my favorite stories.

So Wo..Scabbers has been noticed is NOT what/who they think he/it is, and the kiddos have been told not to say a word about it and a tracking charm has been placed on them all. Padfoot has been congradulated and warned about loosing something he "needs" for going where he shouldn't be by the parents...LOL
Loving the whole thing.
Comments from author:
I find it no more than polite to do so. Glad you like them. Yes, the situation is rather different from canon, but then Harry really had no adults he could trust there.

That does not mean that the danger is over by any means…

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Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from ChaosLady
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I laughed out loud, so many times...
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it, I was hoping for that in places.

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Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from bookworm
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Oh, well done indeed! Let's hope this way the staff can take care of things without Peter getting wind of it...and prove it to the Ministry properly too!
Comments from author:
That would be a very nice solution. But this is Hogwarts, and sense is not something that is part of he make-up of Harry and Ron…

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Review By [bookworm] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from Salric
Review:
You know, I've never seen that particular sequence for Remus discovering Peter. I've seen him see the newspaper article, but I've never seen him be approached after Scabbers disappears.
Comments from author:
Neither had I, but it’s always nice to hear it confirmed. Then again, I’ve not read that much HP fanfic that I can call myself an expert.

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Review By [Salric] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from DofEire
Review:
I do love how you write Dumbledore. The comment about Dawn made me snicker rather loudly.
Comments from author:
I fear I’m confused, is Dawn mentioned in this chapter? Or was it in an earlier one?

I find I must write Dumbledore differently than canon. Or I’ll kill him…
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Review By [DofEire] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twins and Peers" from starwolf
Review:
it was obvious that the Humongous Gazongas, famed for bringing men together in mutual admiration, had worked their miracle.
well put, and any normal raised student would definitely agree. great chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
Yup, let's hear it for Humongous Gazongas!

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Review By [starwolf] • Date [12 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from spikesplayfulpet
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This is my first review for this story. Just wanted to say that I love it and its a great story. I read Luna and the Dark Portrait awhile ago and for some reason didn't realize that you had a sequel. I reread read Luna and the Dark Portrait ( a great story in itself by the way), and then started on this one. This is a really nice tie in with all of the Scooby Gang and the Wizarding World. I like that the Cup is going to be different and that not just 3 people are going to be singled out. Keep up the great writing and I will be awaiting your next update.
Comments from author:
And I thank you for it. I fear that for a better understanding of the whole you'll need to read the rest of Waif's and strays, which is huge.

But I'm glad you enjoy it and that you think that everybody and not just the Trio should get a chance at a better life.

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Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from Eureka
Review:
Love the new chapter Vid. So no more prank war, the cup has changed to all the schools and all the years...gonna miss the pranks but that teh Cup is being changed is a very good thing. Kinda do wonder when they are going to realize that Scabbers is not dead and find Peter instead.
Here's to hoping that all things are going good for you and yours and that the next chapter is soonish.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Well, these are proposals on how to change the Cup, Nothing is sure yet...

Things got worse for a bit, but are looking up again, considering. Thanks for caring and asking.

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Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from Senko
Review:
Interesting chapter although the break between the meeting about Scanners and te one with Oamona seemed a bit abrupt. Hope they reveal peter and I can't help but wonder why with all these smart people no one ever questioned the fact that out of all the small familiars Crookshanks ONLY targetted that three legged rat.

Should ve interesting to see how the changes to the cup affect things.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Originally they were in different chapters. Interesting, is it not? Then again the books hang together from Idiot plots...

If they can convince the other schools and various tradiotnalists to go along with it...

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Review By [Senko] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Good chapter, up to your nicely high standard.

Especially loved how Sprout decreed the end of the prank war.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Sprout is a formidable lady. I always think of her as the Nanny Ogg of the Wizarding World.

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Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Owls and Kneazles" from asqwerth
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Argh.

It's been so long I've forgotten some of the familial connections! Was Trelawny related to any of the Sunnydale gang? I've forgotten.

Previously you gave us a forum link with the family tree, but the link's dead now.

Still a wonderful series of stories.
Comments from author:
Not to worry, the long promised background notes will be going up soon. Trelawney is not related to the Sunnydale gang. Hermione is a distant cousin of Simons, Kendra may or may not be a cousin to the Dumbledores, and the Grangers are related to Moaning Myrtle.

The forum is dead I fear.:-( Glendon set it up, but too few people posted there to keep it alive.

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Review By [asqwerth] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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