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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Possibilities for Post Halloween - Xander (with the help of Giles) signs up for whatever classes are available locally - First Aid, etc..

Eventually, First Responder, EMT, Paramedic.....
Comments from author:
Has possibilities.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragan
Review:
Always one of my favorites!
Comments from author:
Always a good ego strokes to hear.
Review By [Dragan] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
*Starts humming theme song from MASH* Now THIS is one YAHF story that truly works, not only for Halloween, but in the future as well. And I wouldn't mind seeing Faith in that costume either!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
There is not enough Hawkeye Pierce fic
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great crossover with one of the best characters from tv ever. A pity it is a one-shot.
Comments from author:
Yeah there aren't many that top Hawkeye, not sure where I could go from after halloween though really. Quit while I'm ahead I think.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dhampyr
Review:
One minor quibble here. Given that Xander is pretty much keeping his memories fresh constantly on the Hellmouth, wouldn't he have at least gone to college if not med school? I mean, I could see him bar tending to put himself through school , but he's got the mind of a fully trained surgeon in his head. Even if the techniques are a bit antiquated, Hawkeye was a doctor before he was drafted. Xander should have the chops to at least get accepted if not earn a full scholarship.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DireSquirrel
Review:
A Mainer on the Hellmouth. Far more dangerous than any normal soldier. I always loved the books, the movie and the show. This just fits perfectly, even if I wish it was a longer story.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EdBecerra
Review:
Oh, gawd, this is HILARIOUS!

Xander as Hawkeye is a perfect match, and with Andrew as the scurrying little Radar/Klinger mix, it goes into gut busting laughter territory.

Pity this is a once-off, it would make a lovely series.

Ed.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
I won't add a "Korea, damnit!" - I think you've got enough of those. :-)

I do think one of your reviewers missed the whole point of MASH (or is too young to remember). It certainly wasn't pro-war propaganda. Quite the opposite. Besides, most of it's 11 season run post-dated the war.

Not a bad ficlet, if a bit confusing with everything you're trying to cram into it.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Nice. I love watching MASH reruns and giving Xander Hawkeye's abilities was a great way to make him more competent without unbalancing the group.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
I love it, but I gotta ask, without the soldier memories that he originally had, how did they defeat the Judge?
Comments from author:
Germ warfare
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BarefootXO
Review:
I must say that there aren't enough MASH fics out there. Thanks for sharing.

Just one quibble. Hawkeye Pierce served in South Korea, not Vietnam. ;)

Jasper
Review By [BarefootXO] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
If you're going on with this then maybe the Council would pay for updated medical training and a legal medical license after the First is taken care of. A lot has happened since Korea in the medical field and the Hawkeye part of him would be very aware of it.

Otherwise (and you're going to fix the Korea/Vietnam mix up aren't you?) this is a very good idea. Xander's humor and Hawkeye's would meld nicely. Just don't lose all of Xander.

If he does end up in med school he could he meet up with the senior Hawkeye. ( I really liked 'Shoveling' that had them meeting up previously.) Also this would make a funny cross up with House

Anyhow-- good idea as I said before.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Nice story, never seen this halloween version before. Just one thing Hawkeye served in Korea not Vietnam.
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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