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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
I like this piece. Nice little mash-up of CoN and BtVS, full of description without lecturing. I'm hoping against hope for a happy ending for Susan...
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I hope for a happy ending for Susan too...
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Susan is keeping them and Narnia out of the madness and peril of Slaying, I take it.

They're going to be very surprised after *The Last Battle* when they find Susan waiting for them. For that Matter, Susan will be surprised at first to be there.

But, as Buffy says in dsome fanfics, where do you expect a Slayer to wind up after it's all over with?
Comments from author:
Yes, she wants to spare them the horror of slaying.

In my mind Susan doesn't die until after the train crash (with her whole family dead she feels she doesn't have anything left to fight for. Or does she instead cling to the duty of a Slayer and forgoes the boys and parties and dedicates herself totally to her training? Hmmm...)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Roth
Review:
Wow. Very Powerful. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Roth] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from matthew
Review:
Powerfully done.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [matthew] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
Review:
Very, very nice.

I'm guessing part of the reason Susan won't talk to her siblings about important things anymore is that she doesn't want them to be too sad when she dies, which makes it all the more ironic that they die first.

And I like the idea of Susan clinging to the superficial because Narnia is lost to her, and Susan (like many Slayers) will take what she can have. Good work on this.
Comments from author:
That's exactly what I was going for :) Thank you!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calliopesol
Review:
Lovely. I'd always identified with Susan, and had always felt betrayed when she was no longer considered a "friend of Narnia". I kind of wonder what Aslan's take on this would be. Food for thought.

It's a nice length -- very self-contained, but at the same time could also be the beginning of a longer work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I know what you mean, Susan deserves better. She was just coping the best she could. After being a queen of Narnia and then suddenly have it all taken away never to be returned. What would you expect her to too?

Aslan's take on it..... hmm... *thoughts buzzing around*
Review By [calliopesol] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
Fascinating twist on why Susan gave up on Narnia. very well done
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cordyfan
Review:
Nice little snippet and a good premise. An extended version would be very welcome.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Not sure if there will be more though. After this thing clawed it's way out of my head last night it's been kinda quiet up there.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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