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Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from SnakeofMedusa
Review:
Wow, great story! Love Dawn's perspective, whatever happened to the Fang Gang? Hope you can update soon.
Review By [SnakeofMedusa] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from BlameyFomorrii
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This is a really interesting fic. I would like to know what happens next, please.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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Dawn's diary style POV is interesting and well written. It's still uniquely Dawn, but shows her maturity. Not a whiney teenager anylonger. I hope you update soon. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [24 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from chinadoll
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wow! i think this fiction is intriuging please continue to write more.
Review By [chinadoll] • Date [24 Dec 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from Hecatonchires
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This is a great story. It's a shame that it appears to be abandoned.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [14 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from Sunfire
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I really love this one. Not just the plot and story- which are just great by the way - but the voice of it, the tone and personality in the narration is amazing. I love how it sounds and how well it flows. I really can't wait to read more, here's hoping your muses are extra generous with this one.
Review By [Sunfire] • Date [7 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday, April 28th" from kitmarloweescott
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I wonder when exactly did Billie meet Dru, was she a little girl like four or five? And did they have tea parties, I can imagine Dru teaching her how to be a little lady, while Billie teaches her how to rollerblade :) Does Dru love Billie too, does she see her as her niece? Also have you thought of pushing your Anita Blake timeline up to the book Cerulean sins, so that Billie could play with the two vampire children that are staying with Anita?
Review By [kitmarloweescott] • Date [14 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from (Past Donor)houses
Review:
Very interesting take on the fallout of the hellmouth closing. Dawn and Xander would both have been feeling a bit lost, what with their homes and their roles snatched away. While I generally like Xander, I agree that his behaviour here was well within character, as was Dawn's reaction. This is really a fascinating dynamic you've set up for her, and I'm looking forward to where you'll go with it.

houses
Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [19 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consequences" from lyapunov
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Wow, can I just say wow. I don't normally read anitablake stories and only looked at this on the off chance that it might be interesting, and, Wow...
This is a great opening chapter, leaving you wanting more - which I will go and read right away...
Comments from author:
thank you - let me know what you think of the rest, too! :)
Review By [lyapunov] • Date [11 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from kitmarloweescott
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I love your story, I think Dru should kick Xander and Angel's butts. It will give her self-esteem and make Dawn feel better. I was wondering if we will maybe see Dru and Billie out on a outing together maybe going roller skating, the idea of Dru doing it is funny and sweet. Or even ice skating indoors somewhere. I was wondering since in the Anitaverse most vampires have an animal to call what Dru's and Billie's might be? I would think birds or fish for Dru and Bilie I could see talking to goldfish :) Does Xander have any contact with Billie, and does Billie think of Giles as Grandpa? I was wondering if Spike's ghost might ever show up, and will Dawn ever have a jacket like his? Also will Dru and Dawn end up becoming not lovers but Dawn becoming her human servant to fight againist some over coming evil.
Comments from author:
Not likely, possible, yes, yes, definitely not, I really doubt it, and . . no, but not for the reason you think, which means yes, in a way. ;)
Review By [kitmarloweescott] • Date [11 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from Rachelie
Review:
I love your story. It's unique and interesting. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Comments from author:
thanks :)
Review By [Rachelie] • Date [11 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wednesday, May 2" from CPTSkip
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You are writing an outstanding story. I think it is astounding how much the Dawn in your story sounds like the Dawn from the show, but grown up a little. I find the relationship between Dawn and Dru to be very interesting and I was so glad Dru saved Dawn's pictures of Joyce. All in all, this is one original look at both the Buffyverse and Anita's world. I can't wait to see what you will share with us next. I hope it is more about Billie. She sounds like a fascinating kid, half Slayer and half Vamp. Somehow I just bet she is being home-schooled.
Comments from author:
Billie has attended various public and private schools, but due to Buffy's travelling, much of her education has been individual lessons with tutors (or, you know, Willow or Giles). Like Buffy, she's rather bright - unlike Buffy, she's not had the luxury of thinking she could ever be either normal or popular. So, she does well academically. But then, she's 7. Most kids like school when they're 7. Give her a few years.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday, April 30th" from JEDI
Review:
can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible and put the AB characters in at some point
Review By [JEDI] • Date [10 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monday, April 30th" from (Past Donor)houses
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What a fascinating look at Dawn's world. The bit about the revenant was very well done, hinted at in the last chapter, explained here, and nicely ties in Dru's fate with the weirdness of the world. I was intrigued, and a little unnerved, by Dawn's life up to this point, and you certainly have let that toughness shine. She could have been so much more than the show let her be, and she's one tough cookie, so this path for her makes sense. The new role of the Watchers and Buffy in particular is clever, a way to work around both worlds, and really makes me curious as to how the vampire council interacts with the Watchers council. Not that I'm looking for that to be addressed here, more like I'm curious about the logistics in this new world.
Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [3 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday, April 30th" from Hecatonchires
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Really interesting worldview. Good explanation of how to merge the two worlds, and a good job for Dawn. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [3 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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