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Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh please more, more!
This has huge potential, Harry's going to be a Slytherin, hahaha!
This is great, I half expected Lucius and Narcissa to take Harry with them.
Because they ARE blood relatives just a couple of generations removed - wasn't James' mother a Black?
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from AllenPitt
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Narcissa is taking a huge risk ---using Crucio is a no-trial, one way ticket to Azkaban. Counting on the Dursleys never telling Dumbledore... though I suppose "on the word of a muggle" wouldn't be enough to get them in trouble, especially if they countered with testimony about how the BWL was being treated..
Anyway---oddly enough, even with better food & clothes & a bigger room, the primary problem there remains--emotional distance & neglect, i.e. he lives in a how where the adults/family in his life don't like him. Narcissa can't possibly get custody, so he's still stuck in that place for a few more years.
Anyway... they're bent on 'changing' Potter, while not realizing that Draco will change a lot, too in the process. That's going to be interesting.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bedroom Plotting" from InSmithereens
Review:
Love the story so far but I have a minor Brit-pick: You referred to Harry's school as "Little Whinging Elementary". In the UK we call it Primary school. Also you had them referring to it as a "public" school. Over here a "public school" is actually private (fee-paying) and a school that is free for all (eligible) children is called a state school. I know it's confusing but it really pulled me out of the story.
Review By [InSmithereens] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from clockworkorange
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LOL, Draco. Asking if Harry wanted to egg the neighbors' houses in front of his parents. And them not batting an eye at it. Gotta love those Malfoys.

Narcissa was glorious in this chapter. And terrifying. Child abuse must be the ultimate Beserk Button for her.

I imagine that the Dursleys are going to live in a state of almost constant fear from now on. *Whips out the world's smallest violin and begins to play* Too bad, so sad.

Harry's totally going to love the Malfoys forever, however flawed they may be.
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from ChaosLady
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Whoa. Narcissa is vicious! This chapter was far too short!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from Eureka
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Your Cissy was great! Glad you managed to get an update out for us.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from mithrilandtj
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Does Mrs Figg have a clear view of #4?
Or does she live far enough away to not notice the Dursleys' new visitors?

Love Narcissia's fury at the Dursleys ;)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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I really adore your Narcissa! She is awesome!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from Zyanadryn
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Ohhhhooo!! Gotta love Narcissa when she gets her back up!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from kayron
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I have to give Narcissa a nine out of a scale of one to ten! That was a magnificant performance and execution of style! I would give her a ten for not leaving permanent visible marks, but I think it should have lasted a bit longer!
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells like Muggle Spirit (and Fear!)" from Dmitri
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Oh dear, Narcissa really channelled her inner Black in this chapter, didn't she? Not sure I agree with her completely, but I can see where she is coming from, and she is a Slytherin - the muggle-loving gene probably went completely to Sirius and Andromeda in this generation. And yes, the Dursleys' attempt to turn Harry into Cinderella was bad and misguided, to say the least. Hope that the Malfoys will be able to get out of this one, if the truth about it ever comes out.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dursleys, Meet the Malfoys - and your doom" from Geyer
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I love this story! Excellent characterizations all around. I especially like the way you've developed the Malfoys. Draco, caught up in his secret assignment and being seduced by muggle science, technology, and consumer goods, cracks me up and makes me wonder where you'll eventually take this story. Will Harry subvert the Malfoys rather than the other way around? If Narcissa uses magic against the Dursleys, would the infamous blood wards protect them? Or will she do something much more subtle? At this point, the Dursleys could probably be blackmailed into treating Harry better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I've had a lot of fun with this story ;) As for how Harry turns out...well...that will be interesting!
Review By [Geyer] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dursleys, Meet the Malfoys - and your doom" from Loatroll
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Brilliant stuff. Thanks for the great read! Really looking forward to more. I really like your level of characterisation, that Draco despite getting told that muggle-stuff is rubbish finds science interesting, and the way the characters interact, in all, very good writing :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading! This story has been very enjoyable to write so I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far!
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dursleys, Meet the Malfoys - and your doom" from WeasleyisourKing
Review:
Hey are you going to write more?? :D I just watched Harry Potter 7 pt 1 and when Lucious showed up I instantly felt connected to him, like I knew him better all thanks to you! hahaha :D
Comments from author:
I am! I'm actually working on it now :D

Awww, I love that you told that! Yay for Lucius! :D

Thanks!
Review By [WeasleyisourKing] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dursleys, Meet the Malfoys - and your doom" from Tally
Review:
I am really interested to see what Narcissa does to Petunia. Plus, it's always nice to see a few extra layers like Narcissa's work with abused magical children. Please update soo and Happy Holidays!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!
I love working with characters with a bare bones canon background. Adding layers is always fun. I know Narcissa grew up in a crazy inbred pureblood family so you KNOW they got some crazy skeletons in there!
Review By [Tally] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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