I like the story so far. However, I do have one complaint: The TARDIS is a police box, not a phone box (phone boxes are red and modern, police boxes were in the 50s (?)). It was a little distracting correcting that in my head as I read. But, like I said, I like the story so far. I hope you update soon.
Review By [phoenixfire] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Well, I like it so far. I can't tell where you're going to go with it yet, since it's just the first chapter, but it's got a lot of promise. Normally I wouldn't review until a few more chapters in, but since it's your first fic, I figured I'd tell you I'm looking forward to the next chapters :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Not Rated
I really like it. The Doctor is on, and so are the other characters.
I'm a bit puzzled as to how the enjoining spell would have done that. But that's a minor suspension of disbelief thing, and didn't really detract from my enjoyment.
Thanks for writing!
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Very nice start. Well done. Looking forward to the effect on Buffy.
For increased consistency with Who canon, you might consider making sure the Doctor distinguishes between "Word Magic" and any "silly superstitious hocus-pocus magic". I could just imagine that discussion with Willow. I don't know the episode name, but the Doctor was back with Shakespeare dealing with "witches" that were using mathematical "word magic" for evil ends...where this was addressed.
Also, when remarking on distances with the Doctor, think in terms of millions of light-years...not trifling millions of miles. After all, we have people living on this planet who have traveled millions of miles.
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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