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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from DarthPayne
Review:
Now that Season 3 of Walking Dead is almost upon us, will we be seeing any more chapters?
Comments from author:
Yes there will be more chapters... Just not anytime soon. My computer died an agonizing death. Agonizing for me that is. I've been told by my roommates that there was a Klingon death cry there at the end. :( I get more and more ideas with every new episode, and I'm having to write notes on a pad of paper... It feel archaic. I have a plan to salvage my 'Writing' folder from my deceased hard drive, but I don't know how long that will take, or when I'm getting a new computer. Thanks for the interest in my story.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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Livvie's preachy, and walking the fine line of bearable, but...well, the story's entertaining anyway. Is she an OC? Where does the Buffy cross come in? I don't remember a Livvie on Buffy.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from Davee
Review:
Omg!!! Please update soon since the new season started!!!! Love the updates keep it coming!
Review By [Davee] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from SariLane
Review:
i love this. i can't wait for more. really. thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
Review By [SariLane] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from grd
Review:
I love how you portray Livie. Sadly only Otis was able to see she could really do. Looking forward to her surprising the group. It is fun being underestimated.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you like Livvie!
Review By [grd] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from war
Review:
Nice to see Shane sweat a little in fear of the truth coming out but she better be carefull around him or she might have a accident.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review! I didn't really think about Shane going after her until your review, but it seems in line with his character, or lack thereof, to try to eliminate Livvie if he sees her as a threat to his reputation among the group. He doesn't know she saw him shoot Otis yet, but it will have to come out eventually. And then she'll have to kick his ass. lol
Review By [war] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: It's a Massacreee!" from AllenPitt
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I've changed my opinion of Darryl in the last few eps. He just keeps looking better and better. Despite the kind of childhood he must have had, with an older brother who was truly evil....he turned out pretty well.
She should make up her mind about Shane. Being his open enemy in this small group but not doing anything...he might decide to shoot her when no one's looking if he thinks she's a danger to him. Either he's worth keeping around or not. Problem with killing him is, without Otis' body it's her word against his... (in the show I half expect Otis to shamble up, so they realize he's got a gunshot wound...) Meanwhile--yikes, who keeps a bunch of walkers in a barn? My guess is old doctor guy still thinks it's just a disease and is keeping former friends & neighbors in there, waiting for the CDC to helicopter in with a cure (doesn't realize how bad things are out there)....
Comments from author:
I was just telling my sister, that I think the reason Hershel is running out of antibiotics so fast, is that he's trying to cure them. That he thinks they are still people, and can be cured. >_< Eww! I think Hershel might be a little cracked! Thanks for the review!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Meet and Greet and Epic Babble" from Wise
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The characters in the Walking Dead are hardly perfect. That's kind of the idea, actually: they're not superheroes. They're regular people, and they're NOT prepared for the experience of living through a zombie apocalypse, so there *should* be a striking difference in how they approach the situation compared to how a Slayer faces the situation, but you need to be careful about how she comes on, lest she come off as a Jerkass Sue.

Jerkass Sue being defined roughly as follows:
"People not instantly realizing that she is the most kick ass person here and she has to be the one to save the day? Fools! People expecting her to follow the same rules as the other characters? She'll show them!" and so on.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review, and constructive criticism! What you said made me think a lot on how you guys are viewing Livvie, as opposed to how she is in my head. In my head I have her whole character planned out and stuff, and sometimes I forget that you guys don't know everything I do! Thanks again!
Review By [Wise] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Meet and Greet and Epic Babble" from DarthPayne
Review:
Heh, saw the first two episodes of Walking Dead a couple of days ago.

I'll have to look for more fics based in/crossed over with Walking Dead now, this fic has gotten me interested. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Meet and Greet and Epic Babble" from AllenPitt
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Any chance she'll rush off to the high school & save Otis? He was a great guy. And Shane wouldn't have to start (?) going nuts with the guilt...
Comments from author:
I thought about it, and in the latest chapter she kinda does, but I don't know how Otis' 'death' is going to effect the show in the future and I couldn't come up with a way to add him into the plot. :( Sorry! And Shane has always been crazy! I jumped the fence into a firm hate for Shane's character the second he tried to force himself on Lori in Season 1. Behavior like that doesn't come from nowhere, and though he is freakin' hot this season (with the bod, and the new pants) he's still a huge jerk!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Meet and Greet and Epic Babble" from grd
Review:
You have written something here that could be the antithesis of the show. Highlighting the mistakes and hopefully avoiding them. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: A Walk in the Woods" from war
Review:
That group needs all the help it can get.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review! Yes, the group needs a good deal of help. Bumbling around in a Walker infested world, counting on luck and chance to see them through, can't work forever.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: There is No One Left to Hear You." from zTiamaTz
Review:
Glad to see more people doing Walking Dead stories. I like how you've set this up so far. Livvie's attitude makes for a nice change in the group, and her going with Daryl seems like it would be a perfect fit.

Will you be saying which slayer and/or watcher trained her? I'm really interested to find that out.
Comments from author:
I haven't written any flashbacks yet, but I will make sure to include who trained her in them when I write them, just for you! Thank you for your review!
Review By [zTiamaTz] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: There is No One Left to Hear You." from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
like it. Tracking.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: There is No One Left to Hear You." from war
Review:
interesting start looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
Review By [war] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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