Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from slmncpm
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i just found this and would very much love it if you updated it soon! *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
You know what? I should probably get onto that.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [12 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from Chapias
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I am going insane with the suspense, and i just want to read on and on. This story is brilliant, and the characters are great. Your Giles is funny, Harmony is intelligent, and Xander is bad-ass. Can't wait for you to write on.(nudge, nudge, hint, hint.)
Comments from author:
I'm working on it. It's going slow, but I'm working on it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Chapias] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Sorry the thing skipped or something andd made the submit multiple times.
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
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Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Comments from author:
Normally, yes, but there's a problem with that which will be covered in the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from MistofRainbows
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Amusing conversation with Paladine. They should probably break the curse on Jesse before he becomes too stupid to live. I really need to go back and read the books because I don't remember Caramon being that stupid. Actually Giles messing up names of things after hearing it was annoying and seemed out of character as well. Ah well, part of me is still interested to see where the story is going. The other part is annoyed because I think this is the first time I'm actually hoping and looking forward to Jesse dying.
Comments from author:
Caramon wasn't stupid. Neither is Jesse. But both are slow in the sense of them requiring much more time to come to the correct conclusion. Jesse will never become too stupid to live. He's making mistakes because he's trying to keep up with his friends, Caramon just let Raistlin do his thinking for him after a time. Xander and Willow won't let Jesse do that.
As for Giles, he won't be making the same mistakes again. He did gets some things wrong in season one and early season two of Buffy, which is what I'm basing his character on.
Jesse will learn to change. He just needs to find where he fits in with everyone else.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks again!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from prehensileclaw
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An unexpected treat with a tasty cliffhanger.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]