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Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
What a great story!

I do hope you eventually write a sequel.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from Genuka
Review:
Nice. I like the choice to appear to give up and in fact only go to a tropical island to train with some of our "muggle" techniques such as martial arts and weaponry like guns.... I wonder what would happen if they got their hands on tanks, submarines, submachine guns, and other nasty little surprises that we normals have. *snicker*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from ChaosLady
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As for what to do in later chapters: Show a chapter about how Harry and Co. are getting the magically creatures out of England. In the list of people that Harry is training with, I noticed that Hagrid wasn't among them, what happened to him? What happened to Remus and Tonks? McGonagal? Severus Snape?These are people completely loyal to Harry in the books, are they still? Even if they are adults?Are they dead? What about the other Order members? Is Harry waiting for the complete destruction of the Ministry until he reconquers Wizarding England, so it would be easier to start over? Or is he waiting to be trained enough to take on Voldemort? You need to make his plans more explicit or if you want it to be a surprise, don't be explicit, but you should keep these questions in mind.You should definitely show Harry's duel with Voldemort, whenever he decides to do it. That's all the ideas I have, even if almost all of them are in the form of a question. Good luck!
Comments from author:
thank you for this. As you have noted I have left several people out completely so far because they just didn't came to mind while writing so far, but I think at least Remus and Tonks will get a role in the next chapter and to Harry. At the moment he is training and learning, because I always found it strange to sent an under-trained kid against a experienced dark wizard.

So thank you again for these pointers, I will keep them in mind, but can't promise how and when I use them.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wow. I didn't know you were going to take things this far. I think I'll start tracking this now, it's good, but I thougt it was just going to be a oneshot?
Comments from author:
it was only planned as a one shot and wasn't even planned to be posted at all, but then I did it either way and the reaction to ch 1 was just awesome and so many people asked for it to be continued that my muse decided to torture me until i wrote the sequel :) Which you now could read. I'm just unsure if an how to continue it, so any Ideas are welcome :)
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from Gideon
Review:
fun times :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from VillageOrchid
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Some interesting twists here. In martial arts if they were advanced students they would probably have trained for 2 to 3 hours, unless the 1-hour (including showers) was considered a light, review day or more martial arts training later in the day. They probably also would have done the lighter training before eating breakfast.
Comments from author:
tx for reading and yepp just a small warm up because Hermione has planned something else and the day is long to get some more ma in :)

Edit: But u are right one hour for MA is a bit light so i upped it to two. Tx for pointing that out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A good, plausible solution, all things considered. I especially liked that "new to me" trope of the Potters actually owning a lot of land where magical business was done. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from eriktheviking
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A fun reaction from Tom to getting what he wanted.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from Razial
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Great sequel and whilst i do not recognise the cross at the end it does make me wonder if you plan to continue this story. The fact they have plans to deal with voldy shows you have something up your sleave. keep going my friend as I enjoy all your work. (razial)
Review By [Razial] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from Sandi
Review:
And once again it is proven that the hunt is better than the win.

Could stand grammar and spell checked but story moves fluidly enough for it to be ignorable.

The fat Dark Lord. The fight should be interesting.
Comments from author:
ahh as I said at the start of this ch it is unbetaed....I only posted it so you won't have to wait to long for it because Inachis who beta's my stuffs is quite busy atm. It will be replaced as soon as I get it back :)
Review By [Sandi] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from toastbox
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ROFL. Love it :D

It's just something I can imagine Harry doing instead of being angst-y half the time. And it's funny how Tommy seems a bit insecure in his letter back to Harry. All those question marks. For a big bad, he's a bit insecure isn't he. Lol.

Thanks for the awesome read!
Comments from author:
tx that you enjoyed it :)
Review By [toastbox] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent followup to your initial story. I love your smart Harry and the fact he is even smart enough to have two brilliant wives to help when he isn't acting too darn smart. The calm tone of Tommy's letter just amused the heck out of me.
Comments from author:
tx for the review...and he can be calm now that he rules Britain :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from budrick
Review:
pity you wont turn this into a full story , it looks like it would be a good one .
Comments from author:
tx that you like it...I always might decide to write a third chapter. Who knows? Ch 2 wasn't supposed to be written as well :)
Review By [budrick] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thank you for the gift! (Vers. 1.1 150112)" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Heh. Weird but funny. Interesting how Harry just decided to bail, and ended up about as far away from England as it's possible to get.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* they reeeeaaaally shouldn't have messed with Harry and taken better care of him. *snicker*
Comments from author:
tx for the review...part two is also written, just waits to be betaed :)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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