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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very cute! I like it.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
KHAAAAANNNNN!!!

LOL, I have to say that I'm torn which rejected recruit made me smile more. The sheer ruthlessness of Khan wins out for me. OMG, can you picture him against The Bride? Or teaming up with her? *shudder*

Good point that once he achieved his revenge, Inigo wasn't full of anger anymore, so he wouldn't be a good recruit.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Khan and The Bride-their children would be real, real scary tough, smart and ruthless.

Thanks for coming up with the challenge idea. I had read your story about The Bride and shortly after reading it saw the Princess Bride and thought of the challenge right away. I ending up having to write this, because if I didn't, I would have kept thinking about the idea while working on my current ongoing story. It was a true plot bunny jumping up and down for attention.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from texaswookie
Review:
very nice, the 'you killed my father' speech worked in somewhere would have made it really cool in my opinion though.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

One of my absolute favorite speeches.

I just had the plot bunny in my head after reading the challenge and mmooch's story and had to get this written so it wouldn't keep invading my ongoing story. If I had just taken another 5 minutes before posting, I just know I would have remembered to work the speech in someplace. Sigh.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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