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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - School" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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noticed you haven't updated in awhile, hope this hasn't been abandoned cause you show a lot of talent.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - School" from wintergoddess
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can't wait for the next update
Review By [wintergoddess] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - School" from jgoodman
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Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - School" from SariLane
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i like this story. i'd like more.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - School" from Blackett
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Great update!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Pack" from leelaa
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Definitely like the way the story is going, but just one minor quibble. While Dawn was often ...erm... unhappy about not being the top priority timewise for her extended Sunnydale family, she was definitely very loyal to them. 'Never had much of a family in Sunnydale' is just a bit out of character for her. Other than that, love it. Looking forward to the next chapter (and Dawn at high school?). :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Pack" from Gideon
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I'm glad everyone seems to want to use this as an opportunity to build a stronger peace, even if they do smell bad to each other :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Pack" from NutsContract
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Awww, how sweet!!! So I've noticed that Dawn seems to be either changing (ex. sense of smell) because of the new universe, or she had those abilities originally? Either way, I can't wait till Dawn reveals her non-humanity. I'm also surprised that when Jake shifted he didn't see her as a glowing green ball (since he's technically a canine). I wonder how you're going to explain that. Is that another change because of the new dimension?
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [8 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Discussion" from Lisagirl
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i enjoyed reading it please go on
Review By [Lisagirl] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Discussion" from Zyanadryn
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i like it. please continue!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Imprint" from Gideon
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Well that makes things complicated.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Imprint" from NutsContract
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Well that was anti-climatic. Aw, I was expecting a bigger blowout. Well, I guess when he realizes Dawn isn't human that's going to shake things up. I dunno, I guess I just expected Dawn to be a bit more freaked out considering how the Scoobies handle destiny and all that crap horribly.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Imprint" from Sandi
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Edward and Jacob, it's official, someone upstairs hates you.
At least, in Jacob's case, he's not imprinted on Bella's egg. Which was totally gross. Shouldn't he also had a thing for Edward too? After all you can't have baby without both egg and sperm. Sorry inquiring minds...

Nice job on the basic mechanics too.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Imprint" from AriaDragoncrest
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Excellent!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine - Hypocrite" from Gideon
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It is good that Dawn is able to offer an outside perspective on the relationships she sees. It is even better that Edward seems to be listening :) Love should not equate to blindness, about yourself or anyone else. I guess the rest of the vampires don't see it because they are all so old, from times when men were expected to be so controlling. I hope Edward can adjust.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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