Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

I think Jean and Xander could be a good mix. Have them fall under the influence or something and wake up the morning after together. The fireworks should be awesome! Or maybe a bit of Mrs. Robinson with the Storm? Either way, he is wound a little to tightly and needs to let off the steam.

Truth be told, I think that Xander and Jean are somewhat liable to wind up spending a night together at some point, but, even if they did, it wouldn't lead to anything serious. This is mostly because, well, Xander's just too preoccupied by the Ultimates, the Fantastic Five, his need to get back to Sunnydale and dealing with Fury to really think of anyone, particularly someone who he links heavily to his work as 'Surge', in any kind of romantic way. Sexual, sure, but not romantic. Similarly, I kind of see Jean as having this thing about her where, since she can and does read the minds of most men she comes across, she always knows exactly how they feel about her, so she doesn't waste time forming romantic attractions to be people she knows don't feel the same way, hence why she's always torn between Scott and Logan, both of whom make their affections towards her very obvious.

Also, Mrs. Robinson with the Mrs. Storm? Definitely not. Xander kind of hates her purely because he knows she abandoned Johnny and Sue.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot. The "Fake Out, Make Out" was fun to see and it actually seemed like it could be real under different circumstances.

Look forward to the next chapter and the team's adventure in Atlantis. (Why am I suddenly imaging Xander singing Under the Sea during the trip.)

*Edit 5-13-13*

You've never shown how much of a charge Xander keeps inside of him, but I figure pulling a Hulk on Namor with everything he's got and then while Namor is weakened having Ben beat his @$$ would do the trick.

Yeah, I actually think that it could have been if Xander and Jean had met naturally, but they didn't, so they don't really see each other as anything other than a means to various ends.

The Atlantis stuff should be interesting, though I'm still trying to work out how a fight scene between Namor and the Fantastic Five would go. I'm not yet sure whether or not Xander's presence will allow the team a victory.

Edit: Yeah, but the problem is that, at full strength, Ultimate-Namor barely seemed to feel Ben's punches and survived Johnny going supernova, so I'm not yet sure if Xander has enough power to take him out.

good update

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I am very happy with Jean and Xanders 'romance'; light and funny is the way to go
Looking forward to more

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

And Sue comes off worse and worse.

Well, in all fairness, at the moment Sue is trying to deal with the knowledge that her mother is actually alive and has abandoned her for 15 years. She really hasn't been taking it well and is venting, I guess, on people who don't deserve it, but she'll get better.

Poor Xander, picked on by the pretty ladies. :)

Man, it just seems like Xander and the ladies, he cannot help but be himself at times, even as I enjoyed the meet with jean, and then the meet with the Mum storm there, while getting onto Reed for tinkering again, so will look forward to what all will go wrong on this trip.

Dammit man! It's not fair! Jean and Xander would make such a nice couple!! :: le sigh:: great work as always, and always I'm looking for MOAR!


And Xanderfrost too, crack the whip on that muse, sir!

Sorry to disappoint, but I really don't see Xander and Jean as a romantic couple. Friends maybe, but Jean only goes for people like Scott and Logan, who she is completely certain have feelings for her. Now that I think about it, that's probably got something to do with her powers, but the point is that Xander just doesn't fit the bill. He's just plain not interested in anyone that has anyone or anything to do with 'the Ultimates'.

Love this one. btw I think the mothers name is Mary.

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This story just keeps getting better and better! I love that you have Xander pretty much acclimated to the the superhero life, as well as being the PR workhorse that he got stuck as! Keep up the awesome work, I can't wait to see the effects of a lightning bug having to deal with the Atlanteans!

Yeah, after werewolves, witches, Slayers and vampires, mutants and actual superheroes aren't all that strange to him.

Very good

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*laughs uproariously*

Will Xander and Jean actually go on a romantic date?

Well, they might go on a fake romantic date.

Awesome story as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.