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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
Good story. Nice, tight, and elegant.

One quibble:

"The Watcher’s quiet words made everyone stop. He continued in the same tone. 'This is not a spell but a curse of the blackest magic. It’s one step short of necromancy' "

If it's a curse designed to work specifically for restoring a soul to a vampire, it's not "one step short of necromancy", it's actual necromancy - a vampire being a dead body animated and inhabited by a demon.
Comments from author:
Thank You. It was my first attempt at fanfiction.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TinMan
Review:
Such a delightfully small change, for so outstanding a result. How many prophesies lay in ruin? How many that should live die? How many that should die live?

If I have a rec available, I'm using it on this story. It's too perfect in it's simplicity and result for me to do anything else.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
This is how it should have been handled and I thank you for the telling of this tale. *bows low in deep respect*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jimk
Review:
Nice. One of the relatively few fics where Giles actually grows a pair.

Edit: Hell yeah. A bit of Ripper in the Watcher would have been a great character and frankly would have been much more realistic for that job.
Comments from author:
I always thought that the show would have been a lot better if they allowed Giles to be more of the 'Hardman' he was in his youth when dealing with the often self-absorbed actions of his slayer.
Review By [jimk] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Great until the end. Angelus and Angel are two different beings and once again the matter gets tangled up when it shouldn't be.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
A good one shot and in thanks for it - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z3W3FbZuziA
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jormunguard
Review:
Good job, I always kinda wished that they would have listened to Xander in regards to restoring Angel's soul, but I like that you had Giles finally stand up to Buffy.
I was thinking about it though, and I don't think what they meant by soul is what we usually think it means. What I mean is that with Angel yes there is definitely a personality switch between Angel and Angelus. But both Spike and Darla I guess got back their souls, Spike by the trials and Darla by being turned human again, and they IMO didn't really act differently when they had souls than when they didn't. I personally think the souls that they were talking about in both series was more along the lines of a conscience. I could very easily see Liam acting like Angelus if he lost his conscience, and then when its restored to him changing his ways over the horror of what he had actually done. I don't know, what do you think?
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Very well done. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iamthewalrus
Review:
It's nice ro see Buffy make the right choice in a fic for once rather than spout mindless teenage true love crap. This will help her grow as a character in the long run.
Comments from author:
I have some ideas for follow up stories. One of how Buffy deals with her grief and another about who The Powers choose to become their Champion in LA. But it's up to my muse and work schedule if they ever get written.
Review By [Iamthewalrus] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne
Review:
Umm, if this fic is complete, why is it marked as 'chapter 1' at the top?
Comments from author:
Originally it was going to be a multi-chapter story showing what could have happened after Angel/Angelus's demise but I decided to end it there. But thank you for reveiwing, I appreciate it.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
I kinda of enjoyed that.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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