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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from agnar
Review:
This chapter wasn't my favorite. I didn't really buy the assembled group of scoobs having trouble with 15 non-master vamps. Some members would be knocked out quick, but the slayers and Xander, giles too wouldn't do so badly as you had here. Also don't see Xander being so lightly armed in the library, EVER, considering his veteran soldier experience and how many times they've been attacked in that library.

Also, wasn't crazy about the sudden usage of re-telling the same events from multiple pov style, I always find that kind of annoying if not used *really* sparingly.

The only one I see using is Oz's due to his special circumstances. All the rest could've been conveyed from a general outside pov.
Review By [agnar] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Bigfan
Review:
I honestly had no idea how this crossover would work, but damn did you do a great job. Looks like Buffy finally realized that having a soul didn't make you a good person. Thank god she didn't just forgive Angel for what he did. I think that's what drew me the most to this story. Excellent writing and great job! I really hope another update is on the way soon!
Review By [Bigfan] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Delkatar
Review:
Very good chapter!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Buff's not going to like the view she picked up from the X-man's head. Might get some relics from that. Keep up the great work!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great reaction from Xander alongside a cooperating Faith.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from AnFan
Review:
Cool, glad to see an update :)

Is it canon or fanon that says WR&H has a deal with the mayor that keeps them out of Sunnydale while he's in charge? And... I'm going to have to reread this next time you post a chapter because I can't remember if the mayor has been taken out yet. :(

Thanks for the update.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Very nice chapter.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from DrDamage
Review:
Good fic man :)
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from war
Review:
Thanks for the ringo fix til his e arc for the 3rd of his zombie novels comes out this month.

With lindsey in town things should get real interesting. Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Eureka
Review:
So this is the start of the mind reader demons...Oh boy is this one gonna be fun to read.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Ah, another Slayer on the way for Xander to corrupt...Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Not bad.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Wolfkin
Review:
Great, great update with lotsa stuff going on. Why, though, do I get the feeling that A) the "scion of a minor Watcher family" was Xander and B), Travers was just set up to fall soon-ish. At least, I hope so. I've only read a handful of fics where Travers and his faction didn't need a lot of very immediate killing.

Speaking of killing, please don't kill Kennedy. I'm rather fond of her and I really wanna see her reactions to Buffy, Faith and Willow. And someone to talk Art and stuff with Joyce would be nice, so Kenn's Watcher could be interesting as well.

Mind reader Buffy, huh? Without Angel, it'll be tougher to get the heart to brew the antidote. On the other hand, not sure the blood would soak through MI armor, so . . . ^_^

All in all, can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. To answer your questions, B) Yes Travers was set up and A) The identity of Marcus is in his surname. As for Kennedy I have no intention of killing her off
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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