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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from UnseenWatcher
Oh very nice. Love the descriptiveness. Very Pratchett. There are just some people /no one/ wants to mess with. heh.
Review By [UnseenWatcher] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ArgyleButterfly
So who do you have dressed as Lord Vetinari? I might be a bit evil but I can picture the Mayor.

Great story.
Comments from author:
Actually, he would be pretty low on my list of who it might be. And now I may have nightmares with the thought of the Mayor as Vetinari. Thanks ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)ArgyleButterfly] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Salric
In response to Valandar's review earlier, further suggestions:

6) Oz; he's short, yes, but if you just twist his personality to the dark side, his laconic nature is very Vetinari.

7) Larry, just to be unusual but using a character with enough presence that we know his base personality.

8) Devon, likewise.

9) Snyder. *shudder*

10) Allen Finch?
Review By [Salric] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
*snicker, mwahaha, MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Considering Xander;s opinions on Mimes and Clowns, him being forced to use facepaint (doubtless as repayment of a lost bet) would have him do himself up that way.

It could have been worse. He could have come back to himself with a preserved body usable as a puppet next to him (Subaka no Kankuro, Gaara's older brother).
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Omegaprime

I pitty poor Sunnyhell because poor Ethan unleashed something quite nasty into the area.

Whoever the person is, from Xander to Angel, he will terrorize the city and then probably the world with mayhem that only the Patrician of Ankh-Morpork can unleash.

I wonder how this will change the series? I shudder to think about this.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valandar
Now THIS would be an interesting millieu to see glimpses of in the future, especially depending on who turned out to be Vetinari...

1 ) Xander: Somewhat cliche, but at the time he was tall and thin enough to pull it off. And combining Vetinari's cunning and sheer mental power with young Xander's unflagging will and dedication to 'his girls' would be a terrifying combo.

2 ) Johnathan: A bit too short for the part, but one thing's for sure: He either wouldn't have ended up with the other two in Season Six, or he would have been in control and shot down the most ridiculous bits. He'd probably also lock up Warren as his own personal version of Leonard of Quirm

3 ) Warren: A terrifying prospect. Just enough nudge from Warren's own sociopathic side would turn that amazing cunning to the darkness... and should he be turned, even Angelus would throw up his hands and say "DAYUM that guy's frightning!"

4 ) Andrew: Also a bit too short, but there could be quite a bit of humor in the interplay if Vetinari's consciousness sticks around.

5 ) SPIKE?!?!? : Well... since this is early Spike, back when he WAS a threat, this could be as frightening as Warren, or more so - or Vetinari's dedication to keeping things orderly could push him closer to neutral.

Either way, I know this likely wouldn't get continued, and I wouldn't wanna see a full multi-chapter fic on the subject, just little vignettes...
Comments from author:
I'm almost tempted to do ficlets for *each* of them :D
Review By [Valandar] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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