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Review of chapter "Pop-Tarts" from Yodes
Review:
Would love to read more...
Review By [Yodes] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pop-Tarts" from debbie
Review:
Hilarious! Edward really has to get over his controlling vibe before newborn Bella brains him one good time. I'm feeling Bella's pain since I had quite the Pop Tart habit for awhile. Loved the line about Rosalie thinking Emmet sounded like a crack dealer as he tried to tempt Bella to cave.
Review By [debbie] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pop-Tarts" from Keshkreature
Review:
Lol, that's brilliant. I didn't quite understand why Emmett ate the poptarts until the end note though. Maybe I'm just slow. Very cute.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Ye, yes! Please continue! This was amazing!!!
Comments from author:
I actually did manage to write another chapter. Hope you like it!
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
This is a wonderful story. I just re-watched Twilight the other night and a few things made me really confused. When Bella was injured in the studio with James Jasper had no problem with all of Bella's blood, Alice kinda had a bit of a problem. So if Jasper had no problem then when she was bleeding from an artery why on earth would a paper cut cause such a big problem? I do hope that you consider continuing this wonderful story. And think on the question as I am going to ask in to all that write Twilight fic on this sight if I review the work.
Comments from author:
My personal theory on that was that he was too busy destroying James to be overcome with bloodlust. First and foremost, Jasper is a strategist and a protector of the family. In the book, the scene is all very hazy since it's from Bella's POV, but in the movie, I could believe that Jasper's closer proximity to Emmett allowed him to feed off of Emmett's desire to kill James rather than get Bella's blood. Also, his time with Maria conditioned him to fight first and seek his reward (blood) afterward.

The scene at her birthday party was not one wrought with other peril and they were going into it without any preparation for an open wound. Plus, as many others have pointed out, it's possible that Jasper was feeding off of everyone else's bloodlust and the combination of all of it just made him snap. Bella is Edward's singer and he was unprepared for the blood, so he didn't have his guard up and I would say that it is possible that Jasper's attack actually kept Edward from biting Bella because Edward had to split his attention from his desire for the blood and his desire to keep Bella safe when he heard Jasper's thoughts in that split second. One split second it all it would have taken for Edward to end Bella's life himself, even though he loved her.

Hope this helped. Just my opinion on the subject...
Review By [twlight] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
Review:
Sorry for the very belated review. This fic is, like all your Twilight stuff, superb. Thanks so much for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed. I like familly bonding moments, so I may add more as I get inspired to do so.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spikeismine
Review:
I think it would be great if you added more. If you do, please update soon.
Comments from author:
I am about to add more. It took a while to get inspired, but I finally did.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from debbie
Review:
I would love to see what the training would involve, especially if it involved more of Bella standing up to Edward who can be overcontrolling. Nice moment between the two of them
Comments from author:
i decided to write another chapter. I had a flash for an idea and thought it would go well. Let me know what you think!
Review By [debbie] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amazonsummons
Review:
As a big Jasper fan I really loved this and enjoyed Bella standing up to Edward who, in all honesty, can be a bit controling. Would love to see more!
Comments from author:
I love Jasper. He's my favorite. Bella's going to let Edward have it in the chapter I'm about to post, so enjoy...
Review By [amazonsummons] • Date [16 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mercury
Review:
You have my vote for more of this! I love the way you show Bella and Jasper's relationship!
Comments from author:
I love the thought that Jasper would want to absorb Bella's acceptance of their family, especially of him. As an empath, it seems like that would be incredibly soothing to his battered soul...
Review By [Mercury] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
Review:
I would love to see where the "training" would go. Loved the idea as that would explain why she was able to deal with being a newborn so well!
Comments from author:
I thought about it and decided to post another chapter. I don't know how often inspiration will strike on this one, but it did, so I wrote it...
Review By [Eureka] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nomma
Review:
Well, I for one enjoyed this, and I'd like to see the training in action.

As a firm member of Team Jacob, I'm also in favor of anything that pisses Edward off. :D
Comments from author:
Well, I'm about to post another chapter and I think you'll like how Bella puts Edward in his place...can't say I'm really Team Jacob, though. It just went with that segment of the story.
Review By [Nomma] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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