Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of food and throwing things." from MistofRainbows
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Interesting chapter, nice that Willow is settling in and improving. Should be interesting to see how her and Morgana get along.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of food and throwing things." from vidicon
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Dear me, it seems as if Willow is burrowing her way into the hearts of the men of Camelot quite easily. I wonder who Uther has in mind to marry her...
Thanks for writing
Review By [vidicon] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of food and throwing things." from Eureka
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So the fey are "recruiting" are they? But what branch of the Fey is it? Are they the man eaters or the man needers? Glad to see a new chapter.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of food and throwing things." from VillageOrchid
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Glad to see more of this. It sounds like Willow found a brush or comb before her visitors came? Hair wash, perhaps? Your supernatural problem sounds a little more like something from True Blood (Maenids?) than the Buffy-verse, so I'm not so sure how Willow will be able to help. Maybe she has some other esoteric knowledge in her head. I'm glad you had her get a history book, it will help fill in the blanks. Also since it was written for or by the side that she's staying with, having her historical knowledge biased in favor of her hosts will be helpful.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Give me sweeties" from VillageOrchid
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Nicely dramatized. Glad to see more of this. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Don't give him sugar! He'll get hyper. Nicely done. Interaction between characters is how stories are told, mere action is how movies are made these days.
Review of chapter "The House of Rosen" from VillageOrchid
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I hope the memory loss is temporary. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The House of Rosen" from MistofRainbows
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Hmm, not really a fan of Willow losing her memories but it does make the first part easier as for setting up her other identity. Laughs at the blatant cheating that Mr. D did for the name of the lands and the sword. Though really I think she needs to find that land of Morgana's sister that was hidden with magic and take that over. :) Would give her a nice power base. :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The House of Rosen" from SamDragon
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Wonder if she lost her magic or not.You will let us know but when. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great start and excellent job on the characterizations. I've only seen a few of the early eps. of Merlin but I liked what I saw, so I can't wait to see where you take this.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [3 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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