Mind Control, Memory fucky-withy, etc is clearly responsible. Willow is gay, hates guns, and has better ways to kill someone than shooting them anyway.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Interesting setup. Maybe there's a Willow double running around? Because her being this guy's girlfriend of course makes no sense at all. Also if she did decide to murder somebody she wouldn't leave any forensic evidence behind. There'd be a huge fire that burned everything in the room and nothing else, or something like that... The fingerprint is interesting. Setup? Implicate her for a reason? Who knows...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Interesting. I wonder how strenuously Willow is going to deny being involved in this murder? As well as being a fiancée at all! And it sounds like there might be someone from "homeland security" at any interviews they do with her :) This case isn't going to get any simpler for Gibbs!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Good start so far. Sounds like a set-up for anyone who actually knows Willow though, for three reasons. Willow like girls, doesn't use guns, and if it comes down to it she doesn't need guns. Or even pick one up if she does.
Real question is, why go to so much trouble to involve her, yet blunder so much in the set-up?
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Very interesting beginning. You have my interest and I look forward to reading more. Interesting collection of crossover 'verses. If Willow really is involved, I would have expected her to be paired with the blonde.
Well, progress is always good, and we get a bit more info on what Willow is doing and what she did, as well as her alleged tied to this case... but otherwise, it's not much. I think the problem is that so far we only have an unsolvable mystery with no clues, and no conflict either - we don't know what's going on with Willow or her real connection to this, nor why Tony thinks he recognizes her. I hope to see more soon, which will begin to answer these questions.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
