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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from kffs
Review:
Fun!

Thanks for writing!
Review By [kffs] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Genuka
Review:
Thrall? Angel has Buffy in thrall?! not good.
Comments from author:
Sorta kinda. Not so much a thrall more that he wants her to hesitate when they're fighting. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Starfox
Review:
Very interesting story, even if I don't know the Blackcollar series myself.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from LanceAvalon
Review:
On the show Giles talking to 'Sam' over the phone without thinking twice about it. Setting up the trip back to Jamaica. Suddenly writing a letter instead of calling just so that the wanna be pimp can stop it feels forced as hell.
Comments from author:
Yes Giles did call Sam but I don't think that Sam ever returned the courtesy, not even when Kendra was dispatched to Sunnydale a second time. From what I recall from the show she just turned up with a mystical sword. Besides I didn't want Buffy and Co to find out that Angel has been manipulating them just yet. Thanks for the review.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from djhardim
Review:
Very good. I'm a bit puzzled why Zabuto wrote a letter rather than call Giles though.

Referring to an earlier review, it seems to me that Willow is the kind of person that would have dove headfirst into magic (back in season one) when it was revealed. She likes learning new things.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Someone is going to whack Whistler if that ever comes out...

Great chapter.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Vianca
Review:
Shouldn't Xander use the robotic parts to make himself some power armor?
That way he could also prevent a hostile from using his weapons against him, by placing the power cell in the power armor and using somekinda power-connector to power the gun.

Luckely, there is enough inspiration for power armor looks in strips/manga/anime/games/ect.
Comments from author:
Perhaps but the memories he received from Halloween are of a guerrilla fighter/commander who uses low tech weapons due to the effectiveness of enemy sensors and scanners. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from JasonBarnett
Review:
just found this, looking through it for the first time.

Willow didn't start having anything to do with magic till pretty much the end of season 2, so Giles has no reason to know about Willow's power or talk about lessons near the beginning of the story. And I really hate the thrall idea.

Especially since Buffy can't just tell someone is a vamp just by looking so she already knew Angel well by the time she found out what he was.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from trongod
Review:
Looks like there's a few unintended consequences of Angel basically mind raping Buffy way back when - wondering if the Hellmouth sort of spread his thralldom around and so made it easier for the Scoobies to accept him, with Kendra being affected some after her arrival. A sort of bleed over effect that was what allowed the vamp in Jamaica to woogie her mind as it did.

Notice that the description of the Jamaican Vamp was rather close to Angel, so maybe it's a blanket effect as well, now if Dru pops up and gets some slack cut for her unexpectedly, I'd say it carried over to his line, maybe just for brunettes perhaps???

Want to see what Queen C had in store for Our Hero, so hoping The Muses inspire quickly!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yup, yup! Me likey! Keep up the great work! Xander torment is such fun!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker, sing song voice* Xander's in trouble. Xander's in trouble. Xander's in trouble. *normal voice* I can't ^wait^ to see what they have planned for him.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from banditdoz
Review:
Great new chapter Thanks ;D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Good Chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Bobboky
Review:
Very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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