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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from DieselDriver
Review:
So which immortal is in Rome??? Any actual appearances?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DieselDriver
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It took less time because Buffy plays with her prey, like a cat. Xander is more like a human on a mission. Get the job done with the least effort for maximum effect. Yep, that's Xander. Smart lazy person. A smart lazy person gets a job done as quickly and efficiently as possible so as to maximize easy time.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
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Once again I have no idea who or what the crossover is, but it sounds like a good one. I like Xander and seeing him be the hero is always good. Helping others is a wonderful thing. I'm looking forward to more as I read the next chapters.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Grovtech
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As a solider from the future, a black collar just might be the most perfect fighter for defending the hellmouth that there is. Their reflexes are boosted and they are accustomed to being outmatched by the Rygul invaders. They specialize in hit and run attacks behind enemy lines with little or no support which is a lot like Sunnyhell.

So far most of the changes are small, but they are building up. Buffy's worst birthday ever is a critical piece of what comes after. As a Tim Zahn fan I'm waiting for more!
Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [3 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Bobboky
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nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from djhardim
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Looks good. Thank you for another chapter.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [3 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Alkeni
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Good chapter.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [3 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from kffs
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Fun!

Thanks for writing!
Review By [kffs] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Genuka
Review:
Thrall? Angel has Buffy in thrall?! not good.
Comments from author:
Sorta kinda. Not so much a thrall more that he wants her to hesitate when they're fighting. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bobboky
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Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)Starfox
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Very interesting story, even if I don't know the Blackcollar series myself.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from LanceAvalon
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On the show Giles talking to 'Sam' over the phone without thinking twice about it. Setting up the trip back to Jamaica. Suddenly writing a letter instead of calling just so that the wanna be pimp can stop it feels forced as hell.
Comments from author:
Yes Giles did call Sam but I don't think that Sam ever returned the courtesy, not even when Kendra was dispatched to Sunnydale a second time. From what I recall from the show she just turned up with a mystical sword. Besides I didn't want Buffy and Co to find out that Angel has been manipulating them just yet. Thanks for the review.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from djhardim
Review:
Very good. I'm a bit puzzled why Zabuto wrote a letter rather than call Giles though.

Referring to an earlier review, it seems to me that Willow is the kind of person that would have dove headfirst into magic (back in season one) when it was revealed. She likes learning new things.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Someone is going to whack Whistler if that ever comes out...

Great chapter.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Vianca
Review:
Shouldn't Xander use the robotic parts to make himself some power armor?
That way he could also prevent a hostile from using his weapons against him, by placing the power cell in the power armor and using somekinda power-connector to power the gun.

Luckely, there is enough inspiration for power armor looks in strips/manga/anime/games/ect.
Comments from author:
Perhaps but the memories he received from Halloween are of a guerrilla fighter/commander who uses low tech weapons due to the effectiveness of enemy sensors and scanners. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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