Review of chapter "A Spy" from Gideon
I don't think this should be rated FR7. There is kissing (and seriously underage) and even the vampire seems confused about what he intends. I would suggest 18 or edit it to just a kiss on the forehead.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Spy" from Harry
Seto, as a vampire, may be a headache, but he is also one that has a sense of honor. He is not going to turn Stephanie. No, he is going to be a guardian, one who watches his ward. And if ANYONE messes with his ward, LOOK OUT!
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more there. :) Thanks for the nice review, of course. Nice feedback does, after all, encourage me to write more. :)
Review By [Harry
] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]